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message 1: by Amina (last edited Dec 11, 2010 06:19AM) (new)

Amina  (journalistam) The seed was sown two-hundred years ago...

Robin a.k.a Bin and Klutz are two of your average dare-devils. Always getting trouble, they are nearly grounded all year round; but that doesn't stop them carrying out their adventures.

It all happens whilst Bin has been grounded for spray-painting the school walls. It started off as one of their many secret, mischeivous adventures... and ended in something so big, they don't know what to do now.

In an abondaned house just out of town, they find the substance that changes their life... forever.



Ok, so this is what I have. I donno if it's worth continuing so I NEED feedback. Please, if this sounds good, tell me, so I'll start writing.

Thanks, thanks, thanks,

Amina :D


message 2: by Robyn (new)

Robyn S. (thunderscape-7) Whoa, that sounds interesting!
I think you have a good story line here.


message 3: by Amina (new)

Amina  (journalistam) Thanks... Ima start writing today/tomorrow and I'll keep you updated :D This description isn't really as good as the story... but if you like it, you'll like the story. thanks :D


message 4: by C (new)

C I'm so intrigued by the 'substance' that you mention :D From what you've posted as a description, this definitely sounds like an amazing idea!


message 5: by Amina (new)

Amina  (journalistam) Thanks Carina :D I'm just debating on whether to continue or not... gah :P


message 6: by C (new)

C I think that you totally should! I know that I would definitely read it :)


message 7: by Amina (new)

Amina  (journalistam) Thanks :D I just have to think about what I'm actually gonna do. I have a few ideas...


message 8: by Amina (new)

Amina  (journalistam) The prologue is up!!!! And I want maximum comments and people liking it or I'm not gonna bother continuing. lol :P pleaaaaaase, hurry

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


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