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message 1: by ♥Cassie♥ (new)

♥Cassie♥ | 2054 comments Mod
((Start here))


message 2: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 29, 2010 07:24PM) (new)

Sara walked in on a cold winter morning. She had gotten hot choclate and walked in warming her hands "hey Gibbs!"a agent called Sara waved back and walked to her team's office. She went to her desk and sat down turning on the computer


message 3: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) "Mornin' Sara," Bethanie said cheerfully. She was already typing furiously on her computer, which was right next to Sara's. She didn't glance away from the screen as she greeted her teammate.


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

"Hi working hard?"Sara asked logging on


message 5: by Sevania (last edited Jan 06, 2011 06:35PM) (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) "You bet." Bethanie's fingers flew across the keyboard, doing a weird kind of hypnotizing dance as words appeared on the screen in front of her. She was hacking into a criminal database- it would be a great breakthrough for the team.


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

"What are you doing?"Sara asked


message 7: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) "Criminal database." Once she got working, Bethanie didn't like to talk. It broke her concentration. "Nearly... there." Her slender pinky hit the enter key, and there was all the information they needed on a certain terrorist group that had recently threatened to bomb an airport. "Look at this." Her index finger lightly touched the computer screen.


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

"Put it up on the plasma"Sara insturcted


message 9: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) She hit a few keys and did. "Look, they're planning to attack PDX next. The day after tomorrow."


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Sara frowned nodding "any other facts?"


message 11: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) "Wow. This is a lucky hit," Bethanie said thoughtfully. "Look, we've got the names of all the people in the terrorist group." Examining the list, she added, "Some of these people are known criminals."


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

Sara frowned 'it can't be that easy though!"


message 13: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) Bethanie sighed. "You're probably right. This could be just a decoy. But it's been so long since we've gotten an easy mystery."


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

"Which is why I don't like it"


message 15: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) "Okay." Bethanie was disappointed, but she knew Sara was probably right. "I'll keep trying."


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

Sara nodded and checked her watch "I have a video conference with the head of the F.B>I>"Sara said frowning


message 17: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) "See ya," she replied absently, already typing furiously again.


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Sara sighed and walked up to Mtac, or the video center. She talked with the F.B.I head then left. She walked over "Bethanie grab your gear! Got a dead Marine in Virgina"Sara called


message 19: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) "Really? Oh my gosh!" Bethanie locked down the computer quickly. then, standing up she picked up her brown leather, strapped bag and slung it over her shoulder.


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

"yep let's go!"Sara called walking to the evaluator.


((i'm just6 going to fast foward till their at the crime scene. the murder is this
a petty offer name Michale Portland was murdered. a single gun shot to the back and that is all they have. we will make the rest up as we go k?))


message 21: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) (('kay))

Bethanie carefully inspected the dead man, being extremely careful not to taint the blood or get her own fingerprints on anything, for fear they may cover others up.


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

"hey Miller get some gloves on!"Sara shouted frowning.


message 23: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) Bethanie sighed quietly and puled a pair of blue plastic gloves from her bag, wrestling them onto her hands.


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

"thank you"Sara called and went over to talk with their M.E ((medical examiner))


message 25: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) She examined the body closely, taking small samples of blood.


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

Sara walked back over to Miller "the M.E says that the petty officer died about 18 hours ago"she said


message 27: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) "Eighteen hours? How did the locals not discover the body earlier? I mean, this is a public park," Bethanie said. Although it was true that the murder spot was quite a bit off the trail.


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

"off the trail?"Sara guessed


message 29: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) Bethanie shrugged. "I guess." She stepped back, examining the body from further way. "One shot to the back," she said indifferently. "Killed instantly. Murderer unknown."


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

Sara sighed and nodded


message 31: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) "Any suspects?" she continued.


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

Sara shook her head"get the bullet back to forensics"she said


message 33: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) Using sterilized tongs, Bethanie removed the bloody bullet and placed it in a special plastic baggie.


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

Sara nodded "bag and tag"she said


message 35: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) "Right," she agreed, neatly printing the time and the location of the crime scene on the bag.


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

Sara nodded and helped the M.E. roll the body into a body bag "Hopefully we can get something from autopsy"she muttered helping the M.E.


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