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message 1: by Travis (new)

Travis Toll (page26) | 4 comments I once dated a mermaid, but it didn’t work out. Life under the sea just wasn’t for me. It was too cold, dark and wet down there – too many sharks and not enough air. I missed the flowers, trees and leaves – the animals, insects and the coastal breeze. So, with a tearful goodbye I walked out from the sea, leaving behind a love that just wasn’t meant to be. I still think about her now and then, while lying on a beach or during a swim. But it’s then that I bury my toes in the sand…and thank god for my wonderful life on land.


message 2: by Alya (new)

Alya  (alyaaaa) | 68 comments :D awesome poem


message 3: by Travis (last edited Apr 30, 2011 10:35AM) (new)

Travis Toll (page26) | 4 comments ERR’s are hesitant.
EEW’s are gross.
YUM’s are yummy.
WAA’s are sad.
GRR’s are angry.
MMM’s are satisfied.
ZZZ’s are tired.
HMM’s are curious.
SHH’s are quiet.
HAA’s are silly.
HUH’s are confused.
AHA’s are inspired.

So now, dear reader… WHO are you?


message 4: by Travis (last edited Apr 30, 2011 10:38AM) (new)

Travis Toll (page26) | 4 comments Thank you so much for reading Alya! You can read more at: http://pagetwentysix.blogspot.com/


message 5: by Alya (new)

Alya  (alyaaaa) | 68 comments np :P

sure :)


message 6: by Alya (new)

Alya  (alyaaaa) | 68 comments lol the easter bunny one is soo cute :D ans i like the death of a grumpy Poet :) i'll read more later but i've got loads of hw to finish


message 7: by Travis (new)

Travis Toll (page26) | 4 comments Ha, thanks. Good work on the HW


message 8: by Karishma (new)

Karishma Travis wrote: "I once dated a mermaid, but it didn’t work out. Life under the sea just wasn’t for me. It was too cold, dark and wet down there – too many sharks and not enough air. I missed the flowers, trees a..."

Maybe it would help to separate this into lines, but I like it


message 9: by Karishma (new)

Karishma Travis wrote: "ERR’s are hesitant.
EEW’s are gross.
YUM’s are yummy.
WAA’s are sad.
GRR’s are angry.
MMM’s are satisfied.
ZZZ’s are tired.
HMM’s are curious.
SHH’s are quiet.
HAA’s are silly.
HUH’s are confused.
..."


Lol I'm so confused, so I guess I'm a HUH


message 10: by Meagan (new)

Meagan Patterson | 17 comments I love this its sooo cute it made me smile thank you im going to read more now i cant wait (btw im a haha)


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