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Dated a Mermaid
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Travis
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Apr 28, 2011 04:18PM
I once dated a mermaid, but it didn’t work out. Life under the sea just wasn’t for me. It was too cold, dark and wet down there – too many sharks and not enough air. I missed the flowers, trees and leaves – the animals, insects and the coastal breeze. So, with a tearful goodbye I walked out from the sea, leaving behind a love that just wasn’t meant to be. I still think about her now and then, while lying on a beach or during a swim. But it’s then that I bury my toes in the sand…and thank god for my wonderful life on land.
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ERR’s are hesitant.EEW’s are gross.
YUM’s are yummy.
WAA’s are sad.
GRR’s are angry.
MMM’s are satisfied.
ZZZ’s are tired.
HMM’s are curious.
SHH’s are quiet.
HAA’s are silly.
HUH’s are confused.
AHA’s are inspired.
So now, dear reader… WHO are you?
lol the easter bunny one is soo cute :D ans i like the death of a grumpy Poet :) i'll read more later but i've got loads of hw to finish
Travis wrote: "I once dated a mermaid, but it didn’t work out. Life under the sea just wasn’t for me. It was too cold, dark and wet down there – too many sharks and not enough air. I missed the flowers, trees a..."Maybe it would help to separate this into lines, but I like it
Travis wrote: "ERR’s are hesitant.EEW’s are gross.
YUM’s are yummy.
WAA’s are sad.
GRR’s are angry.
MMM’s are satisfied.
ZZZ’s are tired.
HMM’s are curious.
SHH’s are quiet.
HAA’s are silly.
HUH’s are confused.
..."
Lol I'm so confused, so I guess I'm a HUH


