RLP (really lame poems) discussion

Once, every day, I will give you a topic, and you'll write about whatever you want concerning the topic. One rule!! You have to be serious and try. The free writes start tomorrow!!!

YAY!

First topic!!!!! Write what comes to mind and I'll critique it. Don't get mad at me though!!!! I'm just helping.

Afterwards

Afterwards (6/18/11)

The skies darken
with the approaching storm
As rolling clouds consume the sky
Angrily throwing lightening down to the earth
The rain comes next
Pounding the trees
And the animals in them
Tossing the lives around
Unaware of their fragile nature.
But as the winds sweep over the fields and the forests
A sense of calm befalls
As the rain abates
And the thunder slows
Leaving destruction behind
So new life can grow in it's place

- Samino Chene

Rats! I couldn't think of anything!

Today's topic:

Candy Canes

Stripes that swirl
Down,
Down,
Down
Mixing red and white
In the shape of an
Old man's cane.
A sweet, tangy taste
That sits on my
Turned-red taste-buds
Long after the
Tasty treat
Has disappeared
Into my mouth.

yum.

Once there was a candy cane
His name was Billy Bob
And then somebody ate him
And he turned into a blob!

Bad Emily!!! You must be serious here and silly else where!!!
Topic for 6/20/11-

breath taking

(sorry! couldn't help it!)

Post in silly poems with your silly poems!!!

SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You make hard topics!

Yeah right... its not that hard. Wmsee watch

Breath taking 6/20/11

She floats,
unbound by gravity,
Through the air
Flapping her wings only when needed.
Her iridescent colors flash
Against a sunset horizon
The colors twisting and swirling as she dances along the breeze
The sight of her is breathtaking
A beauty uncommonly sighted
And as she dives down out of sight,
Seeking her prey,
I'm left with a feeling of delight
Having been in her presence.

((Can the topic for tomorrow be London?))

yeah! please? so i can write about going to the ministry of magic? please?

London

So crowded and dusty
So loud and so musty
Wherever I go
there's millions of people
And no one I know
I can't hardly breath
Its so crowded
Its really breathtaking
Wherever I go.
No one can speak,
No one can hear,
It's really so crowded
And noisy and loud
That I can't even think
But all the same, its London!

yay!

THAT IS AWESOME!!!! I'm gonna write one later when I'm not typing on my iPod :P

does it have to be a poem?

Well, this is the rlp group, but I guess it doesn't matter. A story about London... AWESOMENESS!!!

hmm.... i'll have to think about mine

Hmm... If it's London, then maybe I could write a poem about Sherlock Holmes! Yes!

mine'll be about diagon alley or going to the ministry

HP! Nice!

i've gotta

My best friend made the best poem for THG. Its called the hunger games addict prayer.

That's awesome! I love writings about things like that! :D

I <3 THG!!!!!!!!!!! FINNICK FOR THE WIN!!!!!!!

Topic for 6/22/11

Discontent

awe crup! i didn't get to do my london one! crup cakes!

Someone's a procrastinator.

i had to think about it

Poetry generally comes to me.

not to me, i write more fantasy

Ugh, I didn't do it either!






Discontent

By Sammy

Yesterday's free write
Was about my favorite topic.
I can't believe that I forgot,
My brain is microscopic!

I could have written about London,
And how I dream to visit there,
But instead I just put it off
But I really really care!

It could have been a poem
About Sherlock Holmes
Solving all the crimes,
But NO! I wrote 0 poems!

The poem could have been about
The amazing London Eye,
Or the house of Parliament,
This makes me want to cry!

I could have written about food,
Like fish and chips or tea.
Though I went and procrastinated,
So no fun writing for me!

At least now I'm writing
About this thing called discontent,
Well, at least I just got out
Exactly what I meant!

discontent

i have to write a poem
about something called discontent
there is just one problem,
i don't know what discontent is

Taylor has no idea
What discontent is.
If she asked me I would tell her
It's unsatisfactional chiz.

i do not understand
sammy's definition
so i'll just sit here
and dwindle upon what i do not know

The whole topic is about
How we feel all unsatisfied
When things come up that are
Worse and cornier than we devised.

i still didn't understand,
so i went and googled it.
it said: 1. Lack of contentment; dissatisfaction with one's circumstances.
2. A person who is dissatisfied, typically with the prevailing social or political situation.
i don't understand, my brain feels the size of a pin.
thanks google, fat lot of help you've been.

Discontent is when you feel unhappy
About the results
Of whatever you wanted to happen
Because they are worse than you expected.

well, gee whiz, thanks!
why didn't ya say that at first?
ya could have saved me alota greif
and cluelessness

:P

What'cha gonna write?

for the daily write? i just wrote like four!

Discontent 6/22/11

As the landscape turns into a whirl of green and brown
we pass the time by staring out the window
never having enough time
to really get a look at something
it's just a useless blob of color
in my mind to forget

-Samino Chene

(How have you liked my poems so far?)

pretty good

I love it!!!!