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post your writing > Please read my story- I want advice

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message 2: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) he doesn't sound girly


message 3: by Ashley (new)

Ashley (mashley310) i agree with Lye

I liked it.


message 4: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ it was cool.


message 5: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) I just posted a new chapter!


message 6: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) cool


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Its good!


message 8: by Zandy (new)

Zandy its really good, interesting, and good at getting people's attention, you just need to tweak the beginning a bit. !:)


message 9: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) you guys read it?


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