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message 1: by Shira (new)

Shira (shiracom) | 4 comments i have written a book it is almost done but i cant think of any ending. any ideas?

its called squirrel girl and its series is called the five stones and im working on a second called rabbit tales. its about a girl and her friends find out they have the power to turn into a certan animal it all has something to do with the rings they got when they were babys. they all realize they all have a past in commen either there das or moms left when they were little. they find out they are still alive but along the way the meet a lot of truobles finally at the end they find out something but then they find new mysteries. help!


message 2: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) is the story here on goodreads?


message 3: by Shira (new)

Shira (shiracom) | 4 comments no im going to put it on as soon as its done (or when my publisher says so)


message 4: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) what about the first one?


message 5: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) kill off the people, that works for me


message 6: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ that's kinda cheap though ... XD


message 7: by Ashley (new)

Ashley (mashley310) r u kidding??? thats like my favorite part of books!!!


message 8: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ when ppl get killed off?? i hate when that happens ... usually. depends on how it's pulled off.


message 9: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) did you call my writing skills cheap? you know they might suck but they aren't CHEAP.


message 10: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ it depends on how u kill ppl off ... idk. i've killed ppl off too ... not sure if it was necessary or not. XD


message 11: by Ashley (new)

Ashley (mashley310) I think its kinda funny, after i finish crying.


message 12: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ O.O ?


message 13: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) I agree with Ashley. (- the girly crying part...jk i cried after i killed a character who was in all of 2 chapters)


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

that character was pointless you made her immortol anyway


message 15: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) yeah i did and she does try to kill both sword and drea in 2 book, but it makes Angel sad (though in 2 book they hate each others guts....)


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

but it only makes the story more complicated, you didn't give the reader enough time to get attached to that character. You should have waited for a later chapter to kill her off.(Though I don't know how you would have introduced Doc, Sword, or Drea)


message 17: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) I wouldn't have been able to introduce Doc, so no sword, so no drea, so no rose, so no gent, so weryt, so no ending. Plus Angel needs a reason for anger to finish his character. Oh yeah and defintly no krea.


message 18: by Alex (last edited Oct 11, 2008 08:23PM) (new)

Alex (bigalreno) | 14 comments Killing everyone off- bad idea. but if you want to kill them, shoot them like 2pac, jk.
Who is the book amed to? If it was me i would have them find one of there mums and she has some hard core troubles. Next book the go and help her.


message 19: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) how is killing characters off bad? I mean everyone keeps saying it is but no explaing!


message 20: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ it's bad because it's taking the easy way out, and it's disappointing to the reader. it's easy to just say, "hmmm. idk what to do. i guess i'll just kill someone off." but i find it more impressive if the author finds a way around a depressing ending, and comes w/a way to solve issues w/o killing anybody.


message 21: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) but I needed them dead..and tecnicly they DO come back in 2 book, is that bad?


message 22: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) Personally, I like the depressing endings, and I get so ticked when people tell me that it's unprofessional. 'Romeo and Juliet', 'Les Miserables', 'Le Morte de Aruthur'.


message 23: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) Oh you forgot Othello and a TON of shakespeares plays.


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

i just watched the most annoying movie it turned out that every thing was a movie


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

o and do u mean shakespeares tradegys cause theres only 9


message 26: by Brigid ✩ (last edited Oct 12, 2008 05:49PM) (new)

Brigid ✩ okay, you guys misunderstood me. i didn't say that ALL sad endings are bad. sometimes, it is necessary. i'm just saying that a lot of the time, you don't HAVE to kill off people to end a story, and some authors forget that.


message 27: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) but, but, it's so much FUN!


message 28: by Ashley (new)

Ashley (mashley310) YEAH!!!

but there r amazing books without dead characters in the end.


message 29: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ yeah ... most of my favorite books DON'T have dead characters at the end!

and how is killing people off FUN?! i don't get it. whenever i kill people off, or even when i come close to killing people off, i start to cry and i feel miserable for the rest of the day! NOT FUN! of course, i try to avoid the situation altogether. i don't like killing characters off; it feels like i'm killing a friend or something. XD



message 30: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) Its weird I dont want to kill characters off but when I am writing It just happens and then I read over it and I'm like no!!!!! I killed them!!!!!!!! but wow! thats really good writing!

thats what goes through my mind when I do.


message 31: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ hmmm ... idk. i just hate killing people off, unless my mind seriously cannot come up w/ANY other way to end it.

i wrote one story where i killed off the main characters at the end, but it was actually a relatively happy ending -- hard to explain. but i still hated doing it, and i'd rather not do it again.


message 32: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) It's fun 'cause you can plan out a murder! Come on try it! It is awesome!


message 33: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ ah. no. i don't like murdering my characters. :-/


message 34: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) You don't? *sniffs and pouts*


message 35: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ nope.


message 36: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) I love creating mysteries!! I'm writing one right now, and I killed someone off in the prologue. Funny thing is, that's what got everyone hooked ;D


message 37: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ see i don't really mind ppl getting killed of at the BEGINNING ... i do that all the time. XD it's killing ppl off at the end that i can't do.


message 38: by Ashley (new)

Ashley (mashley310) but... but.... but.... then its no fun cause no one dies!!!!!!


message 39: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ i disagree


message 40: by Ashley (last edited Oct 17, 2008 04:15PM) (new)

Ashley (mashley310) lol... okay... maybe its only sometimes fun when someone dies.. i must admit their are times when its awful. Bridge to Terabithia is one example.


message 41: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) OH THAT WAS A TERRIBLE PIECE IN THAT STORY!!!!

TERRIBLE!!!!!!


message 42: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) but the plot was devine, oh yeah l am with Brigid, l can kill off characters in begging but not in the end. (exept in 1 storie where at the very end a character is malled by this huge like human size spider and then a vampire who is sort of his friend but sorta not comes and can't resist and drinks the blood, accidentaly turning him into a vampire, does that count? I mean his friends think he's dead and reader thinks he's dead until the 2 book...*trails off*...)


message 43: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) well my charrie i live in the dremas of other people is dead from the start, in white walls someone wil die in the ned but i will not revel that, if its one of the good or bad guys, in resurrection, well im not sure yet

I FINISHED UNWIND!!!!!!!!!!!!


message 44: by Brigid ✩ (last edited Oct 18, 2008 01:23PM) (new)

Brigid ✩ ugh i hated the end to bridge to terabithia ...

YOU FINISHED UNWIND?! YAYZ!! :D WUZN'T IT AMAZING?!


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