future authors discussion

If you read a group members writing and want to tell them what you think, put it here. Make sure you include who wrote it and the title of the story. Please, only constructive comments, but I'm not really worried about that based on what I've seen so far.

Title: The realms

Author: Janelle

I liked it. There were some run-on sentences, and the story line was kind of confusing, but that will probably be cleared up when you add more chapters. It did make me want to read more, and I loved the action.

Title: Shades (I've only read the first 3 chapters so far)

Author: Brigid

OMG!!! That was amazing. I wish I could write that well. It's very well written and has an interesting plot. I can't wait to finish it.

:-)

Title: White Walls

Author: Tale_of_lost_ink

I really liked it. There were some parts where you could have elaborated more. It seemed to move to quickly at parts. Other than that it was amazing!

thanks for the review ashley! ;D glad u liked it ... i really need to work on it though. lol

thnx for reviewing me!!!!!!!!!!!!

im actually finnaly writing the fifth chap riht now! yay!

Title: What Shall Become of Love

Author: Zandy

I really liked the idea, and I want to read more. It seemed to move a little to fast with not enough detail, but that's probably just my opinion.

Title: Dead

Author: Lye

I liked the start. It was really good, and I can't wait to read more.



And just so people know, I'm not the only one who's allowed to review stories here.

oh!!!!! ok!!!!!!!

I read zandy's and ashley my chapter was to short, don't you think?

My prologue was really short. My English teacher always said quality not quantity.

i agree; quality is more important. :)

of course ... i shouldn't be talking, really. i tend to sort of ramble in my stories. tee hee. XD

i have strted brainstorming for nanowrimo i cant believe im gonna do it yay!!!!

yayz!!! i'm gonna do i too. soooo excited. XD

I CANT WAIT I NEED NOVEMBER!!!

ME TOO!!!

what is in novembor?

NANOWRIMO!!!!! (national novel writing month -- write a novel of at least 50,000 words from scratch from nov 1st-30th. it's gonna be AWESOME! XD)

IM DOIN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ME TOOOO!!! I FINISHED MY OUTLINE! WOOT. XD

AHHHHHHH! IM STILL DOIN CHARACTERS!!!!!

oh ... well i didn't do character outlines. i just went right to the plot outlining. i can't outline characters until i've already written about them ... not sure why. XD

hmmmmmm outlines for stories for me always get messed up so i make really detailed characters and not so detailed outlines!

huh ... kinda the opposite for me. :)

i dont get it

its for nanowrimo

Title:~Red~

Author: Brigid

ok so the first three chapters have interested me, I am a little confused with the whole little red riding hood thing but very intigued. The writing is flawless as always, and I want more!

good job brigid!

thanks. :)

ur welcome, i want more brigid!!!!!!!!! dont turn this into another shades!

i'll try no to ... XD i'm almost done w/the next chapter.

yay!

I agree, quality is better than quantity. Except for nanowrimo, because the whole point of the contest is quantity.

Hey, Ashley, can you read one of my stories and review it here, like you did those other ones?

And I'm with Brigid; I can't do character outlines before I've written about the characters, because whatever personality I come up with for the character, they never stick with it, and it always changed when the come into the story.

And if I don't have a plot outline, then I get stuck. I need them...

okay... I think I can do that.

:-)

Title: kidnapped

Author: Sella

Great job! It was amazing. Yes, slightly depressing, but I loved your writing style.

how do you review our stories? can i become a reviewer?

yeah.... just review it make sure you include the title and the author and then just say whatever you want to say.