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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

(Carmine seems like a very happy person.
How do I jump in?)


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

(Oh. Okay.
Well, I guess I'll jut wander around.)

Will left his hotel room bored. He walked around the little town, seeing Carmine in lines from a distance.
He waved.


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

(Brenne was too much like me, childish an dorky. So I think I won't use her anymore. I like Lucas though:)

Will smiled, and decided to walk around, trying to blend in.


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

Will was still stunned but managed to reply .
" Yeah it's fine." He looked away

(welcome:)


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

"It's fine dude." He stood up from the ground
"I'm Will." He tried to start conversation over the awkward thing that just happened


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

He held his hand out too to shake his hand.
His eyes drifted off to Carmine.
"Do you know that guy by chance?" He asked Lucas in a whisper while pointing to Carmine.


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

"No, I was just wondering who he was."
Will was embarrassed now.
He held his head down.


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

"Uh- no." He said shaking his head.
He turned away from Lucas, wanting to go back to his hotel room.

(that is a long ride!)


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

(That's true)

Will started walking away from Lucas, not noticing that Carmine was heading their way.


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

"Woah. How'd you-" He stopped, looking at Carmine
"Hey." He said back to Carmine.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Will lied.
"Not really."


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

"Walking back to my room." He eyed Carmine, feeling like they weren't alone.


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

Will felt bad,
"Unless you wanna come over and hang out." he tried to smile.


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

"Oh. Okay." He was relieved a little.
He smiled and walked back to the hotel.
(who is Lucas following? Carmine?)


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

(Okay, so now what? Carnine left, Lucas is following Carmine. What do I do?)


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

(yeah but then what?)


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

(I fail when it comes to my character. Well, want me to use Brenne again then?)


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

(I don't feel like moving to a different topic. So Brenne is just gonna jump in here.)
Will went back to his room.

Brenne walked, she saw rides, everywhere. *Where am I now! ?
She thought.


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

(sensed her?)

Brenne walked towards a small crowd when she spotted Lucas. She blushed.


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

(oh, yeah she did.)

Brenne's head came up, and a smile spread across her face.
She swung her screwdriver in her fingers.


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

(okay:)

"A little boring, well, how have you been?" she let her arms hang.


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

"That's good." She was distracted by the ride moving behind him.


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

"Hu? Oh no. I was just looking." She said, looking away from the ride.


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

"Fine." She smiled
She stood by his side.


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

"Lucas." She paused
"I think you're the first human I've been with for a few years." She smiled
(She doesn't know he's a demon.)


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

(Haha. No, that's just how Doctor Who went, so I wanna kinda do it like that.)
(Take it, Lucas doesn't want to say:)

Brenne waited in line. She talked to Lucas, making conversation.
"So, we never, "really" met. Where you from?" She asked, with curious eyes and tone.


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

(lol:)

"Uh." She was stuck, the name was hard to say, after the crisis her home town just went through.
"Gallifrey." She said


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

"It is a lovely place." She smiled
She looked at her feet, not sure what to say now.


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

"Oh it's beautiful. The orange skies are the best." She didn't say much, the memories hurt to bad.
She looked at him, sorrow in her eyes.
"Sorry, its just a sore subject for me." She frowned and one single tear ran down her cheek.


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

"I'm sorry." She said, faking a smile also.
She moved up in the line.


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

"Well, how's your little pet?" She tried to cure the awkward silence.


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

Brenne didn't even notice the others around them. She was to absorbed in their conversations.
"Oh." Was all she managed out.


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

"Well, um." She didn't have anything interesting left to say.


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

(Same.)


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