Your writing discussion

ah, ok, finally figuring out the site. my writing is there, you're welcome to it, and any comments are very welcome, good and bad.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/1...

Enjoy.

Changed my name from Rathulfr to my actual name, since i figured i do intend to publish most of this stuff anyway. might as well have you looking for the right name. :) but this will stay here until i figure out how to move it.

Added Chapter 1 to TCOD, kinda long compared to the other stuff i've read here though. Criticss are welcome.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/1...


and yeah, have a Christian blog over at http://life144.blogspot.com you're welcome.

Added part of Chapter 2. Does anyone notice this topic?

ah well, http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I notice it.. I'm kind of busy though sorry!

YES!!!

OMG, that's a REALLY GREAT STORY!!!!

I haven't found a real plot yet, but that completely makes sense, 'cause it's only the first two chapters.

Anyway, keep writing!!!!!

Added the rest of chapter 2 (broke it up, so it shows up as chap 3) and Chapter 3, one of the bad chapters (lousy writing i mean, but kinda run out of ideas to bring that across:(). thanks for the a lot for reviews, criticisms are very welcome too.

Added Chapter 5, Some of the plot should be peeking in by now. hopefully

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Criticism please? Thanks. ideas are welcome too. :)