Writers Café discussion

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2... this is my story link.

This is the link to all of my stories: http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/4...

Thanks. It's not one of the best songs I've written... *blushes*

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Would love feedback on this, if you have any comments or constructive crit, I would love to hear it (post here http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/7...)

:D

Thanks! Looking forward to your comments :)

Wow! Thanks, do you think I should continue on, or do you think that that is the perfect resolution?

I have ideas on how to continue...

Thanks :)
I'm writing more now, if I post here when I have added the next chapter, would you mind reading it for me? :)

Flame, I'v'e put the next chapter up, let me know if you like it :D

Yay! I am writing chapter three now, am about 1/3 of the way through it :D

Hey guys (mods and everyone else) :D

I have two chapters of a novel I'm writing, and a third one is coming soon. I'd really like other people's eyes to look at it and tell me what they think, both good and bad. I really want some constructive criticism.
I'm not that interested in criticism at my spelling and grammar, because I already know it could be better. Just know that English is my second language, and I can assure you that my Danish grammar is absolutely perfect (:
Anyway, here's the link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Oh, and also I want to know if you guys think the chapters should be shorter? Like, chapter 1 for example, should I make that into two chapters, or does it work as it is? (Which is why I would actually like more people's opinions on it)

hi guys!
im new here- sugarbug invited

Hey Sasha!!! :)

Wauw, thanks (:
And there will be more. I write whenever I get the time, but a lot of my time goes to studying(university). Chapter 3 is done. I just need to translate it before posting.

Can you guys read Alien Lover? Here's a link: http://figment.com/books/210391-Alien...

www.goodreads.com/story/show/52601-th...

I'm working on some story ideas. Some of them are from Flame. Would love feedback on them. :)

Girl names:
Rosalie Adams
Helena Twain
Scarlet Saxby
Katie Strick

Boy names:
Dennis Collins
Mark Baine
Thomas Rey
Joseph Dennis


Story Ideas:
Girl is turning 12, hoping to get everything on her wishlist. Girl meets boy, every expectation changes due to friendship. Other background things such as mean girls, school, etc.
Boy trying to get into music school, working his hardest, boy meets girl and girl helps to get into music school. She is there with her grandpa.

Setting:
Kalamazoo, Michigan
Atlanta, Georgia
Chicago, Illinois
NYC, New York

I was thinking that maybe Scarlet Saxby would be a good name for a snooty mean girl.

first girl name
second boy name
first idea
third setting.

Lauren (Flame) wrote: "I'll read it ASAP, Abby. :)"
thanks!

Thanks for the feedback, Abby!

Stefanie Sugarbug Hill wrote: "Thanks for the feedback, Abby!"

anytime! i'm sure whatever you do will be great!

ok!

Abby wrote: "Stefanie Sugarbug Hill wrote: "Thanks for the feedback, Abby!"

anytime! i'm sure whatever you do will be great!"
aww. thanks.

:)

I'm not finished with my story yet.

https://docs.google.com/a/cuyhtssd.or...

oops.

okay!

okay thanks.

Ooh btw, I added a new chapter of my story Echo since I was last on this thread, take a look if you have time :D

Lauren (Flame) wrote: "No problem."

i have another story, could you read that too?

I have just started this for a writing challenge in one of my other groups... your thoughts and critique would be very welcome :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/6...

Lauren (Flame) wrote: "Looks very interesting, Linxie. I'll read it by tonight. :)"

Thanks :D

Hi Lauren, thanks for the feedback.

Can you point out where these spelling mistakes are? I was pretty sure there weren't any, but then sometimes you read what you want to be there, not what really is.

Hi Lauren,

I believe that both of those errors you picked up are actually correct in Australian English. But thanks for mentioning them :D

Not really because I can get Lauren to review mine ANY time :D

What do you think of this one? It's an oldie I dug up from when I was still at school.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Ok so I went a bit crazy with the stuff I've just put up... most of it is stuff I wrote over 10 years ago! (Wow that's scary!)

I thought that by revisiting some of my old work I might get my creative juices flowing again!

Let me know what you think:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/6...

Thanks for the positive feedback so far guys... it's much appreciated!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Another one... be warned guys I think this should be rated as suitable for people over the age of 16 or so...I don't think it's explicit, but it does contain mature material.

Let me know if you agree or not...

http://figment.com/books/209987-The-S...
I've been editing this one for a figment contest, can you tell me if something is still out of line?

Fixed! Thanks!

guys, anyone else got some time to check out my latest?

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Only really suitable for Yrs 16 and up, but not explicit.

You alreasy posted this one.

well if you are offering, could you read this:?
http://www.bibliofaction.com/members/..., the 1 called 'man on the moon' thank you

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/293445-voices-from-the-sky>Voices from the sky (This is my goodreads one)
Voices from the sky (this is my figment one) I noticed no one put any from other sites than goodreads and I didn't know if we could...
Summary:
Brianna is just a regular girl with a regular life, until she starts to grow feathers and has to hide it. She has lots of troubles on the way and can’t control her changes when they happen. She thinks when she is done changing; her life will go back to normal. She thinks she can hide it forever and she isn’t important, but she couldn’t be more wrong…

Tw things;
1. I think I missed a part in the summary... The last sentence after more, "wrong"
2. My goodreads book link is messed up. I'll fix it later when I can get back on my computer again (I'm moving)

Hey guys, got something new i'm working on for another group writing competition. No restrictions on genre, but it has to have a specific sentence in it.

Grateful for your advice, this isn't really something i'd normally write and want to know if you think I should keep going, or pass it in. I'm not convinced.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Here is the beganing of a short story I"m writing. Its something I dream up when working. Alittle distrubing I know, but your imagination run wild when you are bored. I need help with my word play. I try to say something and it doesnt make sense to anyone else. Its not quite finished yet, but I want to know if it is any good before I work any more on it. THANKS! :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...