Writers Café discussion

Woah. I agree, absolutely brilliant.

Welcome! :)

Flame, if I may:

Refrain from using song lyrics in your books if you don't wish to have legal trouble when or if it gets published. Song names or artist names are okay, but not copyrighted lyrics, according to the law.

:D

I actually like that better, Flame.

The lyric was "A tear for every drop of rain", a line from the song So Alone by Anna Blue.

Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9tE31W...

XD

That's amazing!

Great! I'm going to start on the cover.

Let me just upload the pictures, and I'll send them to you.

I have them both on DeviantART.

yes they are.

*Claps* Encore! Encore!

Cool. I have to leave in a couple minutes.

Yes it is.

Wow! Great story! You should keep writing it.

I really like the cover. :)

Nice!

Lauren (Flame) wrote: "I love poetry now...

This one isn't as good though.

Dark As Night.

Clouds
So gray
So heavy

Weighted down
With the tears

Clouds
So dark
So bold

Aren't thee afraid?

Thunder claps
And lightning..."

"Aren't thee afraid" is not proper Olde English, miss. "Aren't thou afraid" is the proper way to say said line. Or even better, "isn't thou afraid." Either would work.


Good poem!

Any time, Lauren!

Rachel wrote: "Shakespearean English (AKA Early Modern English) does NOT equate to Old English, jussoyouknow.

Not like you'll ever need this newfound enlightenment.

We had a HUUUUUGEEE lesson on this in Humanit..."

Of that I am aware, Rachel. :)

Yes.

Rachel wrote: "YOU
ARE
AMAZING."

:D Yay! I'm amazing!

Wow. That is honestly the best poem I've ever read. Awesome job, Lauren!!!!

Yep! Any time.

Wow! Very nice.

You guys should really clam down. It's only people who are following it.

LOL

Oh. :(

Such a sad poem. But very well written, Flame.