Story Contests discussion

This is where people can post their stories. Doesnt have to be a certain topic. Give us the first chapter and judge(s)can rate them. if they score higher than a 5 on a scale from 1-10 then they move on to the next round.
every month there is a new round
stories can be posted until December 2nd. then a new round starts and a new topic starts considering new chapters

This is my first posted story called "My life as an Ex- Geek":





U betcha! Yep she's your average geek. One, her name is May Nork. The name was born for her. Nork was standing for the school slang "nerd and a dork." Two, even though the school uniform was already geeky, she screwed it up. The uniform regulations was a white blouse with a blue tie or bow and a blue and grey skirt. The socks had to be ankle high and shoes had to be all black. Most girls would wear their skirts high, wear baby socks, wear designer blouses, and wore either all black Converse or Vans. She wore a super long skirt and tucked her blouse in. Ya she pulled it up, but it was so long it was three inches below her knees. The socks she had on were loose and baggy with "i love my mother" stitched into the right one. She wore size nine MaryJanes and didnt give a care about who made them. Three, her hair was in messy braids all the time. She wore glasses that hung off her nose and had incredibly crooked teeth that no braces could fix. She also had alergies so bad she could only eat about 6 or 7 different kinds of food when everyone else could have about 90 different kinds of food. She didnt have many friends. She had one, who used to be kinda popular until her father's crazy dog crashed a party at one of the hottest guy's houses and it was all her fault. Now Freida (May's friend), sits with her at lunch. Freida was kinda an average nerd too. but not half as bad as May. She wore a long skirt too and also had incredibly crooked teeth. But Freida had a boyfriend that was sorta cute and he was a great soccer player. He only sat with her at lunch on Fridays cause May has to go to The Yorksher Book Clud meetings during lunch period. After this daily schedule you would think things seem in possible to bet better. And thats how the story came along.

It was a hot Friday in the beggining of Ocotber. May was walking down the hall. Some girls made faces. It was gym period. oh Great. This meant that she had to climb that huge scary rope. Walking down the hall with her small gym shorts pulled up to her chest and her white thights showing, she was nerd material. Kristen Durall stopped her. She was the most beautiful, popular, and most "omg i wanna be her" girl on CAMPUS! And she was talking to MAY! "Hey um...Nork. Uh I'm having a sorta party at this like hotel on Saturday. I thought that if i invited you it make people feel...cooler. So its at the Ritz Carlton on the 5th floor. Just bring the invitation." She started walking away and a Kristen-ette gave her a baby blue card. Kristen stopped and turned. "Oh," she said looking her over. "and try not to dress TOO geeky!" All of 5 of the Kristen-ettes laughed. They were such a group that all of them were wearing matching Juicy baby blue shirts with their name stitched in on the back. May looked at them really quickly to remember all their names for the party. They walked in the exact same order. The tall blond one named "Reilly" was first, then came the one with short black hair named "Valorie", third was the short haired blond that was short named "Lexi", fourth was a tall latina with black hair and huge hoops named "Ana", and the final one was a redhead tied up in a bun that was wearing like 200 dangly bracelets and had a ton of eyeliner was named "Raquel." Of Course the one walking in the front carrying her chem book and had a gold and blue handbag was Kristen, wearing a loose gold shirt that was embrodered with blue stars and a ton of makeup. Her long burnette hair flowed out of her head. The guys walking by whistled and she waved her hand as if it happened all the time. And it did. On Fridays she got the most attention because it was free dress and she most likely got to wear something goldish and blue or something. She wished she could be like her. And yet, maybe that would be impossible.
Or would it?

Caitlin, here's some advice, consult with the moderator first, she might be mad...

...or not but that's not the point

we have to go to the moderator befor we can post something?
wat?!?!?1
thats messed

By the way, I'll give you some advice for your story (and it's actually advice), your capitilazation is wrong, your supposed to enter in conversations, and yeah, the periods are also wrong, and when you post a story you post a link to the story, not the whole thing...

you can post conversational stuff, but what she meant was before creating a topic. this one is fine, but I'm not sure what you mean in your description...

laurne yours arent perfect either
neither are amandas
why cant there be a group where there is no judging people just post their stories and let people read them
how bout we make a new group where any one can do any story they want as long as it stays in the amount of characters you can havewhich is like about 9,500 or somthin
then people can just read stories and you cant criticixe
then there will be a different group where you can talk NICELY (lauren)about others writing

lol hinata, idc if mine is perfect or not, im just happy i could write

ya me tyoo
but even in GG they swear like a ton so i guess i shouldnt have tyo piont out that the swearing is quite a bit in your story
if you read that book its like every 5 sentences BAM some 4 letter word

lol! the main charrie in my story is 17 and i thought that teens swear a lot at that age so ya!

omg! go to the group "if u luv sumone" and read their comments there's this freak named mario who swears in almost all his comments! its so funny to watch them argue!!

ya i noe
go to freewebs and after u sign in go to community then go to discussions then go to forums and click on anything under it and there are the wierdes t topics
previoulsy in GG there was a party and Blair and Nate decided to diss it and go over his housse
i noe wat happens nects
fo sho they 'shimmy down'

lol

k, its time to BE NICE NOW!

we stopped long time ago

sorry, I didn't read all of them. I just read that one, and posted that

ps. I posted a place where you can give advice to others stories, where it is not a contest

but isnt that like criticizaing
can i make a group where you just post storeis
no contests
no judging
just posting

its a good thing to get advice. you can also say what they did right too

ya well when some people only talk bad about it (lauren)

huh?

ya i dont get it

okk

sup caitlin

who has a bebo?

ME

not me, sounds stupid wat is it?

just make an acount
megan t,jenna,jennifer, adn vince have one
o and alexis

fine later

erm

did u have to lie bout ur age cause it won't let me sign up anyway

still won't

i'll lie

on wat?

bebo, bout my age, just like i did on goodreads

what site? (i don't post my age)

Meep. I didn't post my age either...
...until the realization dawned upon me that I could be thought of as a 57 year old guy. 0.o;

lol, im just 12 but my profile says im 13

Really? My sister is 12. xD

And my brother is 10. xD

and u r?

hm? I'm 14. *nods*

oh, cool

sweet. hahaha I bet you're all waiting for me to tell you my age, but HA! I won't! MUWHAHAHAHAHAHa

then dont....unless ur an old man!!

amanda is like one of the tallest and she is the youngest in our class
but ya you have to lie abgout your age on bebo
who has an AIM?

one time my brother was chatting on line with some guy
he asked 'if your a guy type 6 a girl 9' and the dude pressed 6 and sed 'ya im 32,' and he kept on telling this one girl how he wanted to meet her since he's on the high school football team

*bursts out laughing* Darn! How'd you know?! xD

do wat? if its bout me being tall, its not my fault!!

no, she was talking about the guy who said he was on the high school team!