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Haven't read all them yet but so far, they are really good. Keep up the great work :)
Gahh, havn't written in forever but here's a new one
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"I'm fine" are two words that I can not bear
Because I know that, once, I was always there
I was always "fine" through the good and the bad
I was always just "fine" even when I was sad
No, sad's not the word...I wanted to cry
Not the soft weeping, I wanted to die
The screams in my head encouraged me, too
Thinking "Just pull the trigger, it could all be through"
And so many times, I held up that gun
Thinking only of pain..not of love or of fun
I never did pull that trigger
And this you can see
Because I know, if I had, there would be no more me
And sometimes, I still wonder "Would anyone care?"
I bet you think, too..."What if I were not there?"
So lay down your gun, love
Please, set down your knives
There's no need to waste such a lovely, young life
The pain that you fear, when you say you're just "fine"
Believe me, my dear, it's something you can outshine
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"I'm fine" are two words that I can not bear
Because I know that, once, I was always there
I was always "fine" through the good and the bad
I was always just "fine" even when I was sad
No, sad's not the word...I wanted to cry
Not the soft weeping, I wanted to die
The screams in my head encouraged me, too
Thinking "Just pull the trigger, it could all be through"
And so many times, I held up that gun
Thinking only of pain..not of love or of fun
I never did pull that trigger
And this you can see
Because I know, if I had, there would be no more me
And sometimes, I still wonder "Would anyone care?"
I bet you think, too..."What if I were not there?"
So lay down your gun, love
Please, set down your knives
There's no need to waste such a lovely, young life
The pain that you fear, when you say you're just "fine"
Believe me, my dear, it's something you can outshine
deleted user wrote: "Gahh, havn't written in forever but here's a new one-----------------------------------------
"I'm fine" are two words that I can not bear
Because I know that, once, I was always there
I was alw..."
I freaking love this! It's amazing! I love that it it feels like a conversation and the message you managed to convey. Beautiful
Love, Pain, Blood and Tears: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...