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message 1: by Brooklyn (new)

Brooklyn (thebridge) Your thoughts?


message 2: by Brooklyn (new)

Brooklyn (thebridge) I would say yes, because criticism on my writing always helps me to write better, but there is negative criticism, which I don't like...


message 3: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
Criticism...but here's my rule of criticism.......for every bad thing you say, you have to say something good!


message 4: by Brooklyn (new)

Brooklyn (thebridge) I like that!


message 5: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
:)


message 6: by Shreya (new)

Shreya C. (darthallow) I like that too! I'm not actually a big fan of criticism. It's nice that the readers can help me make my writing better, but it totally sucks when you work so hard on something and even check to see where you can improve, and they have plenty to call you out on. It kind of makes me feel like I stink. Like poo.

But...Sunshine Ninja slices her gold sword through the clouds of gloom and reminds me that I will always beat everyone at everything, so it doesn't hurt to make myself EVEN awesomer.

~ THE END ~


message 7: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
:P like the last paragraph there ^^ lol ugh i hate reports.....OH WAIT I SHOULD TELL YOU WHY THE CHAT XD


message 8: by Shreya (new)

Shreya C. (darthallow) You should.
Please continue XD


message 9: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
:P


message 10: by Brooklyn (new)

Brooklyn (thebridge) Which is worse-someone telling you your story is bad when it's good, or someone telling you your story is good when it's bad?

Did that make any sense to anyone? :)


message 11: by Shreya (new)

Shreya C. (darthallow) Someone telling you your story is good when it's bad, because you know it's not admirable and so your commenter/reader has to fake admiration for your piece just to keep you from tearing it to pieces.

It does, but I wonder why you asked that...?


message 12: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
haha because Brooklyn barely ever makes sence.....OMG BROOKLYN I LOVE YOU DONT KILL ME!!!!! *hides under her bed* I IS SOORY I IS SORRY I IS SORRY!!!!!!!!! XD


message 13: by Shreya (new)

Shreya C. (darthallow) lol :D i think she means it, Brooklyn ;)


message 14: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
:P


Kayla ~The Mirthful Messiah~ (Chucklevoodoos142) XD! Ana we're already hiding remember???
(Back on the topic) I like the idea of good and bad comments, probably because I'm a bit of an optimist and thinks everyone is good at writing...(well not everyone. There are some people in my school that think 'the cat walked to the store' is spanish.)


message 16: by Brooklyn (new)

Brooklyn (thebridge) Wait...you mean it isn't? :P


message 17: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (last edited Mar 12, 2012 09:25PM) (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
lololol Bookland XD
by the way...ESKIMO YOYO XD


message 18: by Shreya (new)

Shreya C. (darthallow) Huh? And lol Kayla, I know what you mean. Some people are mentally deficient since birth, but they act normal, so they get classified as "average" when privately they should be in "assistance drastically needed immediately."

I guess with comments, they should ALWAYS have something postive, and when bringing up negative things, try not to sound biased.


Kayla ~The Mirthful Messiah~ (Chucklevoodoos142) Shreya wrote: "Huh? And lol Kayla, I know what you mean. Some people are mentally deficient since birth, but they act normal, so they get classified as "average" when privately they should be in "assistance drast..."

XD! Epically.


message 20: by Brooklyn (new)

Brooklyn (thebridge) "assistance drastically needed immediately" fits some people in my school pretty well. One girl thought the capital of Idaho was Montana! :P:P


message 21: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
BOOKLAND HOW IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE XD


message 22: by Brooklyn (new)

Brooklyn (thebridge) I have no idea. :P


message 23: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
lol wow....


message 24: by Shreya (new)

Shreya C. (darthallow) Brooklyn (Bubbles!! My bubbles) wrote: ""assistance drastically needed immediately" fits some people in my school pretty well. One girl thought the capital of Idaho was Montana! :P:P"

I actually snorted when I read that!


message 25: by Brooklyn (new)

Brooklyn (thebridge) Nice... :P


message 26: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
XD


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

Wow. You guys are really off topic. I like criticism because people are never perfect at anything, and we could always improve.


message 28: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
^^


Kayla ~The Mirthful Messiah~ (Chucklevoodoos142) We're always off topic. XD


message 30: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
lolol totally true


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

Yep. *sigh*


message 32: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
what's the matter? XD


message 33: by [deleted user] (last edited Apr 01, 2012 04:07PM) (new)

The fact the we are utterly off topic.


Kayla ~The Mirthful Messiah~ (Chucklevoodoos142) XD! We're just great at this aren't we?


message 35: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
we're never on subject.....


Kayla ~The Mirthful Messiah~ (Chucklevoodoos142) XD! Honestly it seems like whenever we have a discussion we turn it into a chat. XD! We're great!


message 37: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
I KNOW RIGHT ^^


Kayla ~The Mirthful Messiah~ (Chucklevoodoos142) LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMS, my brother actually thinks I might get over this Sonic craze. O.o


message 39: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
really???


Kayla ~The Mirthful Messiah~ (Chucklevoodoos142) ya...then again I guess I did get over Snake Eyes.


message 41: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
lol


message 43: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
YOU GUYS KIDNAPED JACK BLACK! BUT THAT'S ILLEGAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD


message 44: by [deleted user] (new)

this is not the muppets, dear.


message 45: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
lol ....i need a funny quote.............................


Kayla ~The Mirthful Messiah~ (Chucklevoodoos142) Hmmm....how aboout: "AAH! AMY I DON'T HAVE TIME TO WRESTLE!!!!!" From the incredibly smart words of Sonic the Hedgehog. XD!


message 47: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
lol XD no i have one.......let's see if I can find it again...
"You may not realize it when it happens, but a kcik in the teeth may be the best thing in the world for you."

XD you should go find out who wrote that ^^


Kayla ~The Mirthful Messiah~ (Chucklevoodoos142) XD! Was it Walt Disney?


message 49: by Anastacia *gaining love*, You know from TV (new)

Anastacia *gaining love* Asbury | 15015 comments Mod
XD maybe.... XD yeah it was XD


Kayla ~The Mirthful Messiah~ (Chucklevoodoos142) XD! Lol, I didn't even have to look it up!


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