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Chelsea Denisse
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Mar 09, 2012 05:51PM
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what is a good way to start to write a poam we are learning about that in school and it is super boring
i have gotten one of my peoms published in a school contest and am waiting on a reply for another
this is the one i am waiting on a reply
Fight Time
Remember those sunny afternoons,
Lying around thinking about the moon.
Wondering when the sun will go down,
So he can go to town.
He walks out alone no one in sight,
He walks alone until he reaches the fight.
He is ready as he walks up to the ring,
There is the bell Ding, Ding, Ding.
He swings right and kicks left,
Getting a hit in like a theft.
He takes the hits and falls to the ground,
He loses the fight in the very last round.
But just like before he will be back,
He won’t give up and that’s a fact.
Its night time,
Its fight time.
this is the one i am waiting on a reply
Fight Time
Remember those sunny afternoons,
Lying around thinking about the moon.
Wondering when the sun will go down,
So he can go to town.
He walks out alone no one in sight,
He walks alone until he reaches the fight.
He is ready as he walks up to the ring,
There is the bell Ding, Ding, Ding.
He swings right and kicks left,
Getting a hit in like a theft.
He takes the hits and falls to the ground,
He loses the fight in the very last round.
But just like before he will be back,
He won’t give up and that’s a fact.
Its night time,
Its fight time.
I have a thing for rhyms lol XD Nice poem!
OMW that was amazing i like that supper good
