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message 1: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) WOOOOOOOOOOW!!


message 2: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) I stare
Blankly at
My jounral
I am lost
Lost for words
I don't know what
To write...and
Probably never will.
I am 87, and have been
Sitting here since
year 11.
I am lost.


message 3: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) I think its creepy!! She has been sitting there for YEARS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But its nice to.


message 4: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) flum.


message 5: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I'll get you un-lost, person in the poem!!!


message 6: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) I walk along
THe dark and
Gloomy road
I see a lone figer
hunched over a dairy.
"What is lost..?"
It says. I try to
ask the figer a
Question
But I soon see
That it is too lost
Mentally, for me to recues
It.
It.
It.
LOST.


message 7: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) Mine is January, who is FINALLY FREEEE!!!!!!!!YAY!


message 8: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) YAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!


message 9: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) YAAAAAAAY!!!! How old will you be?


message 10: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) wow!


message 11: by Soumya (new)

Soumya I have nothing to live for
For my life has ended
There's no one to comfort me
I'm alone
in
the
lost world.
I sit on my bed
thinking
for what have I got to loose?
I have my life....
I have my dreams....
I have my memories...
I have everything
to lose.
For I am no one
just a lost one
wandering about
looking for a quiet place
to seek my death.




message 12: by Soumya (new)

Soumya I don't really feel that, but it came t me. It's horrible.


message 13: by Soumya (new)

Soumya my character does though!


message 14: by Soumya (new)

Soumya my character does though!


message 15: by Soumya (new)

Soumya I meant that the poem was awful, and yea the meanings are awful as well.

That's good.


message 16: by Kevin, learning alot of people secrets (new)

Kevin Jimenez (latinalover) | 206 comments Mod
ok..... lol


message 17: by Kevin, learning alot of people secrets (new)

Kevin Jimenez (latinalover) | 206 comments Mod
man ihave a couple of poems


message 18: by Kevin, learning alot of people secrets (new)

Kevin Jimenez (latinalover) | 206 comments Mod
yea but it is about "gangsta"


message 19: by Soumya (new)

Soumya I'm reading a book
but
suddenly, I'm dragged away
far away
to a place
a lost place
everything's blurry
I look around
but see nothing
it's a blank place
a lost place
a place
that is dreadful
a place
I want to get out off.
But how?
for I am lost
in the unknown world
the blank world
the lost world.
Wait....
light, a hint of light
Is there a way out
yes, yes there is.
I open the door
I go through the door
light, lots of light
but no one
is
there.
just light
nothing else
Oh, a door
far far away from me
I got to reach it
for I want to get out
of this lost place
this dreadful place
for this place is horrifing.
I run and run and run
but no door.
I keep on going
I'm running fast
very fast
but still no door.
More light hits me.
It tries to drag me down
but I don't stop
I'm determined
to get the door.
I'm almost there.
Yes, I'm almost there.
Soon,
I'll be out
of this lost
dreadful place.
Oh yes.
I'm reaching
my hand out
as far as I could
to touch the door.
YES.
I touched it.
I slowly open it.
I step in
and I'm back
wit my book in my hands.
I've made it.
i've got out of the
dreadful,
lost
place.


message 20: by Kevin, learning alot of people secrets (new)

Kevin Jimenez (latinalover) | 206 comments Mod
and about pregnant teen girls


message 21: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) HUH??!
Blomming: cool poem!


message 22: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) sniffels? Are you sad?


message 23: by Soumya (new)

Soumya thanks.


message 24: by Soumya (new)

Soumya Janeen said the poem i wrote was cool.


message 25: by Kevin, learning alot of people secrets (new)

Kevin Jimenez (latinalover) | 206 comments Mod
Leah wrote: "a little bit. I'm in texas for a family reunion. I am around Kevins area where he lives."

one day maybe u move to austin and we will be together


message 26: by Kevin, learning alot of people secrets (new)

Kevin Jimenez (latinalover) | 206 comments Mod
ok hey this mi gmail if u want to send me messages. kjimenez32@gmail.com


message 27: by Kevin, learning alot of people secrets (new)

Kevin Jimenez (latinalover) | 206 comments Mod
(hugging u)


message 28: by Kevin, learning alot of people secrets (new)

Kevin Jimenez (latinalover) | 206 comments Mod
(kissing u)


message 29: by Kevin, learning alot of people secrets (new)

Kevin Jimenez (latinalover) | 206 comments Mod
how much do u love me?


message 30: by Kevin, learning alot of people secrets (new)

Kevin Jimenez (latinalover) | 206 comments Mod
so r u in love with me?


message 31: by Kevin, learning alot of people secrets (new)

Kevin Jimenez (latinalover) | 206 comments Mod
wow will u do anything for me?


message 32: by Kevin, learning alot of people secrets (new)

Kevin Jimenez (latinalover) | 206 comments Mod
ok. so the laptop is it urs?


message 33: by Kevin, learning alot of people secrets (last edited Dec 22, 2008 07:45AM) (new)

Kevin Jimenez (latinalover) | 206 comments Mod
o ok so do ur friends know dat we r dating?


message 34: by Kevin, learning alot of people secrets (new)

Kevin Jimenez (latinalover) | 206 comments Mod
do they know wat i look like?


message 35: by Kevin, learning alot of people secrets (new)

Kevin Jimenez (latinalover) | 206 comments Mod
o do they agree about us dating?


message 36: by Kevin, learning alot of people secrets (new)

Kevin Jimenez (latinalover) | 206 comments Mod
u didn't tell them about us?


message 37: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) DIFFERENT SUBJECT, PLEASE!


message 38: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) Er...I guess that's okay. Can you guys just, like...stop? Please? My mom threated to delete my account so I can't see you again becuase she knows you guys are dating. It's upsetting me and my mom.


message 39: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) THANK YOU!


message 40: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot)





I am lost
In a nightmare
A very, very
Scary dream
I cannot get
Out of it
no matter how
I try
I am lost
Lost
Lost
Lost forever...
I yell.


message 41: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!! :PPPPP


message 42: by Soumya (new)

Soumya I read and read and read
I'm suddenly falling into the book
the pages go on and on
while I'm flying through them.
I come to an empty page
no words
no pictures
nothing.
I'm lost
in a lost page
but wait....
no
I'm not
lost.
A lost imaginary place
where I can bring myself
out of this boring world
to a new world
a world that never exists
a world you've always dreamed of
i'm suddenly moving
moving very fast.
at first
I think
I'm lost again.
but wait....
no, I've come to
a beatiful place
such a beautiful place
now, I'm not lost
but lost in my dreams
my wonderful dreams
and I'm never
coming out of it.
never


message 43: by Soumya (new)

Soumya thanks.


message 44: by Soumya (new)

Soumya Oh please lost one
come back to me
for I need you
desperately need you
you're the one
who's completed me
for now
you've deserted me
in a lonely place
uncomplete

Oh dear lost one
come back to me
for I'll give you anything
anything in the world
just come back to me

Oh lost one
you're killing me
with sorrow
and pain
and grief
so come back
we'll do anything together

oh lost one
if you don't come back
take me with you
for I won't be a burden
just a small thing
following you about
all I need is a tiny place
not even a quarter of space
just a tiny space
for I need you
without you
I'm
not
complete.


message 45: by Soumya (new)

Soumya no I'm terrible at poems.


message 46: by Soumya (new)

Soumya okay.


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