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message 1: by Hylian Princess , Head Evil Person! (new)

Hylian Princess  (hylianprincess) | 629 comments Mod
((we should write a story where this guy loves this girl, but she's totally oblivious, and her best friend (another girl) sees it))


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments ((That would be so totally cool!))


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments Annabelle chased her little brother around their backyard, laughing.
"Aarron! Come on!" she called as he slipped out of her grip again, laughing.


message 4: by Hylian Princess , Head Evil Person! (new)

Hylian Princess  (hylianprincess) | 629 comments Mod
((should annabelle be the love interest's best friend?))


message 6: by Hylian Princess , Head Evil Person! (new)

Hylian Princess  (hylianprincess) | 629 comments Mod
((I picture the best friend w/a name like that))


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments ((Lolz my best friend IS named Anabelle!))


message 8: by I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (last edited Dec 27, 2008 09:43AM) (new)

I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments ((The one to the right is Anabelle:

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message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

Kevin fell asleep and almost fell back on his chair


message 10: by Hylian Princess , Head Evil Person! (new)

Hylian Princess  (hylianprincess) | 629 comments Mod
((nvm...))


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments ((Couldn't we just give them any name?))


message 12: by Hylian Princess , Head Evil Person! (new)

Hylian Princess  (hylianprincess) | 629 comments Mod
((yeah! it doesn't matter, I was thinking of something else...hehe))


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

((ok))


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "AARON! Come on!" Anabelle called. She ran up to Kevin's window.
"Oh come on, you have to tell her somtime." she said climbing up a tree next to his window.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "Your already great friends. I'm sure she'll feel the same way." said Anabelle smiling.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "Yeah.... well she'll get over it, he's a jerk."


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments Anabelle thought. "Hhhmm... we can help her figure it out." she said shrugging.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "Coommmeee ooooonnnnnnn!" Aaron whined. Annabelle gave him one final wave, then ran back down the hill with her brother.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments Anabelle sighed and walked home, her little brother whining the whole way.


message 20: by I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (last edited Jan 10, 2009 09:28AM) (new)

I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments Anabelle looked at him, skeptically.
"First thing. Batman is out." she said looking at his pajamas.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "Wow... okay......" said Anabelle shaking her head.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "I mean it might actually look good on you!" She shoved the shirt into his amrs, and dug more. "Perfect! Now put these on too." she said tossing him some black jeans.


message 23: by Sophie (new)

Sophie | 4 comments Kevin swung open the door with an annoyed look on his face.
"She's supposed to like me for who I am, or whatever!"
Anabelle glared at him.
"Fine," Anabelle said cheerfully, trying to keep a good perspective on the matter.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "Well she'll like you more this way." Anabelle added smiling.


message 25: by Sophie (new)

Sophie | 4 comments Kevin smiled, knowing she'd chosen Anabelle as his best friend for a reason.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "And... wait just a second." Anabelle took out a brush, straightner, and hairspray.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "Now let's see..." Anabelle brushed and straigthened his hair, ignoring his whines.
"Ta-da!" She said turning him to face the mirror.


message 28: by Sophie (new)

Sophie | 4 comments He stared at the strange boy in the mirror.
"Uhhhh...It looks great?"


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "Yep!! You look nearly perfect, just some cream to cover your zits..." said Anabelle handing him some cream.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "Wow..." Anabelle said softly, staring at him.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments Anabelle bit her lip, still staring at the mirror. Lucky Isobel.... she thought sadly.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "Yeah..... good luck." said Anabelle softly.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "Yes?" Anabelle asked quietly.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "Oh. Well okay. It might be.... difficult, but I'll try."


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "So...... I guess I'll start training you tomorrow.. I have to go now."


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "Annabelle? Are you okay?" Annabelles mother asked. She shook her head, and ran up to her room, crying.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments Annabelle closed her eyes, sobbing quietly, feeling horrible inside.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments She had a hard time staying quiet, so her parents wouldn't hear. Why does he love her so much? She obviously doesn't like him... she bit her lip and continued crying, letting the unconciousness pull her under.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments She woke up breathing quickly, then sat up, and looked at the clock. It was oficcialy day one of training.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments ((Annabelle's hair is brown, and doesn't Alexandra play her Sophie???))

"Keeeevvinnnn!" Anabelle called walking up the hill, stopping at his door.


message 41: by Sophie (new)

Sophie | 4 comments ((okay, i deleted my last comment i made b/c i was extremely confused. sorry, guys.
and apparently, no one plays anyone, we just all kind of write the story.))


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments ((It kay.... oh okays. Makes sense.))


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments ((Oh that is so guy like!!!))

"Hi.." she smiled a little. "Come on, we are going to the mall." she said pointing to the mall in the distance.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "But first thing, change into something casual. We'll get you a new wardrobe at the mall." said Annabelle turning him around, and pushing him up the stairs.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "Good, here you go." shae said handing him jeans and a t-shirt.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments This is going to be soooooo impossible! she sighed and kept walking.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "Now, first, we need to go to..... hhhmmmm... Aeropostal." she said walking into the store.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "Now, we need to get you something.... cool. Oh try this." she said handing him a dark blue shirt.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments She sat and waited, impatiently. "Are you done?" she called.


I ♥ Luke Castellan *Alexa* (i_love_jacob_black_95) | 73 comments "You have ten seconds!" Anabelle called.


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