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message 1: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) Heya! I'm writing a story which is currently five chapters long...

Please read and tell me what you think!:
Click here!


message 2: by Dee (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 185 comments Hey Rayanna,

Your story makes you an offical member of "The Young Prose Society" :]


message 3: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) Yay!

Wait, what is that?


message 4: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) Oooh...

Well then, I am honored :)


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

i'm confuzzled.


message 7: by Dee (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 185 comments Smiles at SBG's insight into the world :]


message 8: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) >< Can I be a member?


message 9: by Dee (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 185 comments <--whispers to Seth...you already are a member :]


message 10: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) *Whispers back* How did I not know this?


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

*whispers to Seth and Dee* You guys r confuzzling, can I be a member?


Xerxes Break(Vivian Ephona) (ephona) *whisperes* yeah me too?


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

i'm sooo confuzzled right now.


message 14: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) How did we not know this!?


message 15: by Just Plain Ray (last edited Dec 27, 2008 09:35AM) (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) Because no one ever told you....?


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

that doesn't help, where is it?


message 18: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
very confuzzled


message 19: by Dee (last edited Dec 27, 2008 09:44AM) (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 185 comments "The Young Prose Society" is an exclusive group of talented young writers.

History … "The Young Prose Society" was a serendipitous happenstance. On November, first, 2008, a small gathering of young creative minds formed together to become a movement on Goodreads. The movement slowly grew into a society.

The future of writing is within their innovative story-telling!


message 20: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
cool!


message 21: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) oh coolio!


message 22: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) Oooh, awesome!


message 23: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) *is currently writing chapter 6 of story*


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

*is currently thinking of how to write chapter 8*


message 25: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) Oooh, can't wait to read Chapter 8 of your story! :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

That's chapter 6 if anyone is interested...


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

Thank you! that and the rest of Sparx too, man i hate Mark and Mason right now.


message 27: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
*writing more of my new story* YAY!


message 28: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) Yay!


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

i need to switch comps to work on my stories . . . but i don't wanna.


Kjersti but you can call me Captain YOUNG PROSE SOCIETY!!! BWUHAHAHAHAHA!!

It is my pet, yes. Haha, I luv having new members. And Seth, how /did/ you not know?

*goes to read Gothik's*

Oh, and by the way...a tad bit more up on Cutter.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I'll be working on it throughout tonight, so...


message 33: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) Yay! *claps*


Kjersti but you can call me Captain haha. Hey, there was some new stuff at the end of Chapter 3. Did you read that?


message 35: by Dee (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 185 comments Claps hand like a little kid on Christmas morning, with a shiny new toy...Woo Whoo, more of da Captain's story!


message 36: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) No, but I just did!

Very intruiging


message 37: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) Okay, so I've seen on other groups how people make covers for their stories and what-not, and they usually have a quote on it based on the story.

So I need your opinion:
What would be a good quote for the cover of my story?

My friend does some really cool things with Photoshop, so I'm going to ask him to make me a cover..


message 39: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
you write fast!!


message 40: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) Thanks! It's just when I'm bored and no one is on Goodreads, I start typing *sheepish grin*


message 42: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) Yay~!

and did u read my story?


Kjersti but you can call me Captain I think I'm on Chapter Five. :/ *goes to finish*


Kjersti but you can call me Captain Very interesting. I like it. You've some typos, but I'll forgive you. ^^ My only other two concerns are:

1) Seth and Jack are both black-haired and green-eyed---not exactly common.

2) Some of your paragraphs are ungodly long. They make my brains hurt. Try breaking it up a little.


message 45: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) 1) Yes, that was just a mistake, but i have an evil idea for Seth's black haired ness
2) Are you being sarcastic? Lolz, cuz my chapters are only like 2000 characters long or so..


Kjersti but you can call me Captain No, the chapters are fine. You just have these massive paragraphs that go on and on and on. It's easier to read if you break them up a little bit.


message 47: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) Ooh, sorry bout that

I will put that to mind when I'm writing Chapter 10 ^^

(which i should start doing soon...)


message 49: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) I made this whole document with descriptions of the founding five...
but it's on another account on the laptop, so i can't get it..
Let me try to remember their names: Leandros, Gavina, Dugald, Ceri, and...something with an H.


Kjersti but you can call me Captain >< haha, well gl with that. I'm gonna go run.


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