The Zandy Group discussion

I will choose the winner of this contest. Please write a short story that does not exceed more than a couple of pages. There has to be atleast 4 characters in it. One of the characters has to be named Riley, and one of the lines has to be: "She didn't have to die".
Good Luck!
I will choose a winner by January 12th!

Do the characters just have to be mentioned? Or do they actually have to be in the story?

Riley does not have to be human.

There characters can just be mentioned if you want, but what are you planning to do? There must be some characters in the story. Unless you have a different, better, idea...

Well, I was planning to do something, but then as I went along, it changed, but I'm thinking I might go back and edit it so that a few of the characters are only mentioned o.O

Okay, I can't wait to read your story. Also, try to get some of your other friends to join the contest. The more participants, the better!

I've started on mine. It's about twins, Riley (girl) and Anna. Riley's a witch, and Anna's a human. But their blood scent is twisted. Thus the title "Twisted Twins"

Lolz, I started mine. It's about a guy named Ryan, and his wife, Meganne died. Their daughter is named Riley.

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I am sure that you can change it to a he.

do we put it in link, or straight on here?

I'll just link it, but if you want pasted here then I'll delete the link and put it straight on here. it's short.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Natasha wrote: "...Could we possibly use he instead of she in the line "She didn't have to die"?"

my reply is, if you really have to, I'll accept that, but I would prefer you didn't.

I like your ideas! Can't wait to read them!
So far, I've only read Bells' is.

i meant Bells' story.

*bounces* UGH! I finished mine, but I really, really don't like it!!

Natasha: Ok, whatever you want to do.
Rosie: too bad! but i bet you can make it better!

Come on, guys, only one person has entered in the contest. I want as many people as possible to enter!

ok, heres my story. I hope you like it :) http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

natasha ur going down :p

probably, but I'm gonna win this contest. and theres nothing u can do about it :p

Im going to do it if i have the time

It's ok, Natasha. I always go over the page limit, without knowing it and then its too late. :)

thanks for your stories so far, guys! *wicked, evil smile* very interesting stories.

2 More Days!

r u sure u cant choose me as the winner 2day or even 2morrow? ;)

I am sooooo gonna win. u dont stand a chance agaisnt my supreme writing skills. :p

I think Natalia might also b competing and maybe Amanda.

im not being argumentative. u r by disagreeing w/me. Besides all I'm saying is the truth. I am gonna win :p and 6 people is still awesome :)

Yah, I definitely think more people should compete. I might compete.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Here's my story, because (obviously) I'm never going to get around to fixing. Just as warning, it might be confusing. SORRY! I wrote it late at night, and was feeling in a sappy mood.

great, now we have four people entered!
Don't worry Rosie, it doesn't matter.

the winners picked tomorrow!!! :D i cant wait untill i win! ;)

Hey, guys, since obviously there will be no more contestants, I am down to the final two. It will be so hard to pick! All four of your stories were really good, but one of you didn't have the line "she didn't have to die".

Hey, guys, the previous comment was made by me, not Olivia. I do not know why it says Olivia, that was really wierd I think I double clicked on her photo or something when writing it....?!
Anyway, the previous comment was made by me.
Srry

when will u post the winners? tonight (please), tomorrow morning, after school, or in the evening?

Could you, ya know, tell us who the final two are?

is it me and Rosie? ;)

ur not in the top 2, im sorry but ur in last place. i told u, u shouldnt have done a genie story. ;)

Oh, harsh. Lolz, why am I in both of your options for top two? My story really isn't that great.

because ur story is awesome and isnt about genies :D

no I'll be in 1st, rosie will be 2nd and natasha will b 3rd. Zandy will announce me the winner and everyone will shower me with chocolates and money!! ;D

Well, good luck with the chocolates and money part, Sarah! I, for one, have no intention of giving any up ;)

Oh, and thanks both of you :)

Oooh! I LOVE CLICHED STORIES! Usually. :)

Yeah, that's where my usually comes in xD

u people r just jelous of my awesome story :p

If you want, I will tell you one of the final two, but I don't want to get anybody's hopes down.
I will announce the winner tonight, it is so hard to choose!

Can you tell us the final two? Or at least me xP.

can u tell me 2? its ok if u dont want 2 disapoint natasha and just tell rosie and me ;)