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I was bored so I decided to make another one...and I know I'm new but yeah. And sorry, no real prize for this one because I can't give them out.

I am sleeping peacefully in my room when I hear a high pitch scream, a gunshot. My Mother. They bang on my door and force it open, draging me out of bed and into a sleek black car. I feel a sharp needle in my arm, and the world goes black.

When I wake up, I am seated in a completely white room, with a window in front of me. I know what it is. The person on the other side thinks it is simply a mirror, but people can see through it. And the person on the other side....my brother. I am forced to watch as they beat him, almost killing him. If that wasnt enough, they then put him on a lie detector, but from first sight I knew it was rigged. I tried to turn around so I didnt have to see, but a knife appeared at my throat so I stayed put. I was right about the lie detector being rigged, everything my brother said was apparantly a lie. We both knew it was true though...if only that was what they believed. Then I saw them give him a death sentence, happy with his pleading. No one protested. I didnt dare cry. A rope swings down from the ceiling with one loop in it. The loop went around his neck. And I watched as they pulled the other end of the rope. I saw my brother mouth one word.
"Ashe."

(here is mine. Its the prolouge of my working-on-book, The Dragon King. The prolouge is called : Ethan's memory dream.
Link to accuall story: http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/9... )

Ethan was walking down the sidewalk in his old town, Demongrounds. Odd name for a town, huh? Ethan was heading home from a long day of school. He would always say 'Hi' to Old Man Ralph, at least thats what Ethan called him. Ralph would always belive in a 'curse' his amulet had. Ethan passed by his house when Ralph was running toward him.

"Take it, boy, take it! I want to end my life! Take the curse away from me!"

Ralph put the necklace on Ethan and then he held his chest. He was having a heart attack. Ethan paniced and went to help him, but a blur of darkness entered him and flung him to a stop sign and he hit his head. This is when it everything changed...

When he saw again, he saw the whole town was dead. Blood was everywhere, no person in sight... no life in sight...

"Hello? Anyone here?" Ethan yelled, but there was no reply. He looked around. He was in the middle of the Demon street, not Taurus. Ethan ran home, and saw his home was attacked, too. He ran inside and saw no sign of his parents. His eyes turned pitch black and he transformed into a red beast. This is when he woke...

Ethan grabbed where his heart was, scared to death. But that dream was no nightmare...It was a memory.

I noticed also.

Indeed... :(