Writers Café discussion

Ooh. I like this. I could definitely see her being stolen as a little girl, and then cared for by one of the wolves, until she is old enough to save them. And the dream part sounds interesting. I was also thinking that perhaps Willow has to prove herself to the pack, because many of them don't believe that she is their Savior.

Sounds good. I still need to develop my idea.

I do too! I can't wait to read it!

Lauren (Flame) wrote: "Amara wrote: "Ooh. I like this. I could definitely see her being stolen as a little girl, and then cared for by one of the wolves, until she is old enough to save them. And the dream part sounds in..."

Glad I could help. ^^

It's epic, my dear Lauren.

Sorry, I've been waiting to that since I watched Sherlock Holmes this morning. XD

It kind of seems choppy to me, Flame. You're jumping around to different (and seemingly unrelated) topics every few sentences, which makes for a rather confusing summary. Try to think about the main components to the story and work on that; it seems to be that you're paying more attention to insignificant (or semi-insignificant) details rather than the main plot.

I think so you should do what you feel is right, Lauren. But I have to agree, it does sort of skip around.

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EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!

Sounds really good!

Write faster.

Yes, faster.

I don't know. You get it done quicker and then you can edit it. Some of a writer's best work is done in the editing.

Nice! You are much farther than I am, I only have a few chapters.