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Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
This labrynth (maze type thing) is a place dark and quiet where all you can remeber is whatever happened from the time you enetered on.((did i say that ok??? so you cant remember anything except what has happened in the labrynth, no past, nothing...)) Once you come out again you will have no memory of what happened inside. The labrynth goes on for a lifetime, every time you make it out, you will be in a totally different spot in the world of the between.

No humans may enter


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
I look at the girl, walking slowly through the mist, i look super wierd. is that me? someone comes up behind me and i shiver, knowing the i will not be alone again until i get ot of here.


message 3: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) My feet below me move slowly, why the heck did I choose to enter this?? I couldnt remember anything!!!
Ahead of me I could see a silhouette of someone, maybe a girl?


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
I look back and see another girl, walking slowly towards me. I frown, why did she enter, knowing she would probably never come out again. I look back at the mirror that was stuck on one of the mazes many walls. I see the girl coming closer and i whip around, ready for the worst.


message 5: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) She turned around and stared at me with a face ready to kill. I looked back into her eyes and walked closer...Did she really think she had a chance with me? A evil creature of the devil? Is not that I was proud of myself but I could defense myself maybe even kill, though would I kill her? I knew the answer to that. Ofcourse not. I didnt want to harm her I just wanted to find a way out of this damm plase!!!

-I didnt mean to scare you- I whispered to her, maybe she knew a way out and could help me.


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
"im not scared you idiot" i look at the shock on her face. she thinks i can help her but i require a payment. "i cannot help you until you help me". she is thinking that she can kill me. does she not know who i am? who is this being, intruding on my space, thinking she can defeat me?


message 7: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) Her words made me laugh, I looked down at her giving the fact that I was a little taller, so she wasn't a little innocent girl after all she was fierce and stubborn! Hahaha this made everything more interesting. I liked her, maybe I could get to know her better.

-So in what can I help you?- I asked her with a little smile growing across my face.


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
i look up at her and realize, shes taking advantage of my size. " thats for you to find out, but i have the feeling you already know" i grow a couple inches taller and look her straight in the eyes, " i want my sister back". I feel my eyes flash bright blue and turn their normal green color again. my anger is bubbling out, causing my hair to blow around my face, even though there is no wind. Her smile is fading slowly, i grin at her hidden fear.Does she remember who i am? she must. I will make her remember, but first i want her help, and so i quickly make my anger fly away and i say "lets goi for a walk and see if we find anything helpful."


message 9: by Ana (last edited Jun 30, 2012 07:45AM) (new)

Ana (avdraws) ((What the heck Nati??))

So she was trying to rub in her "amazing powers" Well then I should make her believe I was scared of her, this would be so fun. But if she got to rub in her power why didnt I get to?? I will leave that for later on or maybe never. I turned around and walked away to my right were a hallway had appeared out of nowhere.


message 10: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) -You wanted to go on a walk? Right? Are you coming??-I asked her looking back at her.


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
"of course" she was playing with me, i could see it right away.

(((part of my character is being a mystery, plus, it makes a good story when the readers dont know whats happening til later on...)))


message 12: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) ((Yeah but you could tell me before hand, oh and please to tell my emotions I wont tell yours okay? Thats my job:]))


message 13: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) -So your name?-I asked her without looking at her.


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
"mary" i say, avoiding her eyes.

((what??? but i know your emotions, one of my powers...))((but i wont say anything i made up, ill just repeat what you said ion my point of view))


message 15: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) -Hmm I think I have heard that name before... Mine in Des, Desteny really, you can call me whatver- I told walking a little faster ahead of her.

((okay, I really dont know what my power is yet))


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
"I know already, where do you think this hallway leads?" i look over at her and smile, my adventure has begun


message 17: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) -What? How did you know my name? I have no idea where this hallway leads maybe outside were I really want to go!!- I really had started to hate her a little.


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
"I will not explain, where, what, no. this will not lead outside, im sure of it, it will not be this easy." I walk down farther, not looking back to see if Des had followed. I turn a corner and find myself staring at a door. A big door. I call Des over and slowly turn the knob.


message 19: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) Aghh I followed her just to see whyshe had called me, she was so annoying and stubborn.
-What!?...ohhh-I said in surprise looking at the door she had just oppened.


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
"I think we will be able to stay here for a couple of days" I say as I look at the wide space, the fields with tall blowing grass, the stream of pure water, the apple tree in the middle... I know its not real, well, it is but it isnt the outside. I smile at Des and decide to change my attitude for now, maybe we can be friends. I let my eyes twinkle and run out into the grass, screaming with happiness, laughing then at my change and start to roll down a hill. I hit the bottom with force but ignore it and scream at Des to get over here and have fun, but in a nice way.


message 21: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) ((Hahaha that's great cuz I really hated your character:D jj my character did not me...well hahaha))

I could see that she was trying to be nicer so I decided to go along with it and maybe become friends or something like that at least. I ran towards her and roll down the hill laughing out loud.
-So what do you think of this place? Do you think there's a way out?-I asked her, and no fear ran through me, what if the door was gone and we were trapped in here forever??? I looked at her with a expression of fear and started to run up the hill to see if the door was still there.
-Come!!!What if the door is gone???!!!-I yelled back at her.


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
(( :D ))
I was having fun and I was laughing at her crazy attempts at rolling down the hill, but it was a nice laugh. I was actually enjoying myself. that was when Des looked fearfully at me and so, intinctally, I looked back to see what it was. she shouted something about no door and I quickly thought the worst and started to follow her up the hill. Side by side we made it to the top and I sighed when I saw a door, but then screamed with rage when I saw that it wasnt the same door. I looked out across the field and saw thatthere was no other way out. I collapsed on the ground and started sobbing, making a mess of myself. I look up at Des and pull out a grin and say, "we will find something, we will do something about it" and sag again, all positive energy leaving me.


message 23: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) I had no idea what to do, I had never been the kind of nice big sister to my little brother, Ihad always been the big mean sister not letting him do anything. I loved him so much that I dodnt want anything bad to happen to him, but I had no idea how to tell him. And now we were trapped here and I would never be able to tell him.
I sat down beside her and rubbed her back having no idea what to do.
-Well maybe it will lead someplace good...you know maybe out of the labyrinth?-I whispered to her trying to make her feel better, I asked her the last thing because I wasent sure if she was happy about what was at the end of the labyrinth, outside.


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
I pick myself up and help Des up, too. I go over to the door and open it, rushing thngs but I needed to know what was there, I look back at Des when i see what is there and feel my self starting to go pale. My last thought as I faint is that Des will have to deal with whatever the other side brings us.


message 25: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) I ran towards Mary and catch her before she reached the ground, aghhh what was I gonna do know shw had fainted and I was alone with a body to carry now ((I am not using correct grammar)).
I looked into the door she opened and saw ocean. I took a step fowards feeling sand between my toes and the smell of salt water in the air, evrerything was dark and silent.We had come from the day to the night. I looked around and saw some trees farther on.
Marys weight started to get heavy, I put her down in the sand and looked back to find myself staring at forest behind me....THE DOOR WAS GONE!!!!
I decided to find a safe place and rest. Picking up Mary again I walked towards the forest and laid under a tree with Mary beside me.


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
I open my eyes to see brightness and I quickly shut them again, groaning. Was that blue I saw? I open just a slit of my eye and see that we are in the shade of a tree and are facing the ocean. How the heck did we get here? Des is at my side and Im not sure if shes noticed that im awake again or not. I try to sit up and moan with pain, lying back down. What the heck happened to us and why were we on the flying beach. Yes, i recognized it right away, but the thing i was wondering was, why hadnt Des started flying yet? Maybe she didnt know, of course, the first time I was here I had been walking and had started floating upwards and after that i worked until I could control it. The thing was, here, there was no gravity, so, how was Des not in the air? I close my eyes and try to sleep, not wanting to deal with anything right now.


message 27: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) ((What???!! What about if you only float in the day? and not in the night?))

I opened my eyes to surprise myself by not feeling the hard ground under me. I looked at Mary and screamed
-What the heck is happening???!!!- I looked around me and was freaked out I was floating of teh ground each time higher and higher. I looked ad Mary and saw that she was in pain,
-Are you okay?-I asked her worriedly.


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
99dunno, wanted somtin cool... :D))

I open my eyes again at a scream. Des is finally floating. I mutter a curse under my breath and shout out, "its ok,just concentrate on floating downwards and youll be fine." I grunt at her question about me being ok and close my eyes, only to open them again at the sound of a crash and i open my eyes but i cant see anything. What happenend?


message 29: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) -Sorry!! I cant control this shit!!!-I screamed sitting up and leting her free from my crashing back.


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
'oh!" i say to complete blackness. obviously Des can still see, what happenend to me???


message 31: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) -What happened??- I asked her finally controling this stupid thing a little.


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
"i dunno,"i mumbkled. "its like i cant see but i can still hear, feel and taste and all that, did I just lose a sense? is that possible?" I had a feeling she didnt know but i asked anyway, i couldnt help it, i wanted answers.


message 33: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) -I dont know! Can you help me control this thing and maybe find something we can do about you not being able to see??-I asked her still freaking out


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
i grumble and fall asleep


message 35: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) I shake Mary until she opens her eyes and tell her
-Common please? I know I havent been tha nice but I am just not good with all this stuff okay please help me, what are we gonna do?-I tell her


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
"I have no idea" i shout then i smile, horrified at my shout and say calmner" well have to think of something together".


message 37: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) I looked at Mary and nodded trying to concentrate on staying down
-So let get to know each other better, umm what about when you said you knew me already, I mean whats up with that?-I asked her, it all had been so weird.


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
"Do you think I am going to answer that???" I snap at her. "I am tire and hungry and ive actually been throug a lot and here I am having to answer questions to a stupis dirl." I feel really angry right now but i see what Ive done and quickly apologize, "Im so sorry!!! Gosh!!! sorrysorrysorry sorry!!!!" I decide to tell her. "Well, when I was a little girl, I ran away with my sister, Mary. Back then my name was Lucy. We got so far as to be in this beach but we were only 8 at the time and didnt know what to do. I got off the beach quickly enough but Mary didnt know how to control the gravity and she got carried away. In the distance I saw her fall into a womans lap and I also saw when the woman gave her a hug, well, Mary hugged her back. Since then I havent seen her and I dont know what happenend to her even though I have my doubts. Since that very day, I have followed a promise that I made to the sky when Mary dissapeared from my view and that was that I would do all it took to find her, to get her back and so that was the moment that I learned to do magic. I told you my name was Mary because I wanted to see if you recognized it and


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
I think you did because, the womans lap in wich Mary fell into was the lap of your Mother."


message 40: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) "Your her sister??!!! Your little Marys sister??!!! I cant believe that, well I grew up with her for onky about 2 years I am 3 years older than you guys I cant remember everything, but I remember that one nigth she jumped into my bed terrefied by a night mare and then teh next morening....welll....she was ....just gone....A year later my mother had my little brother and I promise my self I would never let him go away the way I had doen with Mary, but know he hates me because he thinks I am an overly protective sister who hates him and dosent let him do anything, and now I will never have the chance to tell him how much I love him. All my life I had been looking for Mary and now also my brother, Wes." I told her looking away while a tear I had not wished for slid down my cheek, I didnt want her to see that I was crying,this was not me I never lost control of my self!!!


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
"wasnt his name des?????" I thought I had heard something like that but I hadnt been sure... "why did you let Mary go?"


message 42: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) "No his name was Wes, I didnt let Mary go she was just gone though it was all my fault I should have stayed up all night trying to comfort her and I did at the beggining but then whe she fel asleep I did to and in the morning she was just gone... I dont know hat happened..."I told her looking away.


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
I cringed at the thought of Mary just disappearing. I thought about all my lifes work of trying to find her. I look at Des and sigh, thinking how now I wouldnt need her but I couldnt just leave her, right? "Des,how about we just get out of here? But, you'll have to promise to help me find Mary if I get you out of here, ok?" I look at the water, the sand, the crabs scuttling around. It was so peacefull here, but Mary came first. I grab Des's hand and start running as hard as I could. I do a flip in the air, dragging a screaming Des along and mid flip, We dissapear. Looking at those trees, my pain comes back, remembering this house, I colapse on my knees, Seeing my mom, standing there, wondering, like what the hell just happened here?, I couldnt stand it any more and I mve again and go to Des's house. We land on her bed and when I see her face, I forget my pain and start giggling wich turns into a cackle, wich means I cant stop laughing. I wonder, now, what she was screaming of, fear, rage, complete screaming at my randomness, I choak on my laughs, tears streaming down my face. I think of what it would be like to be her, to be stuck on a beach and suddenly have someone grab my hand and pull me along while she runs. To have then be flying hrought the sky and land on your bed, having been just in a forever labrynth. I burst out laughing again.


message 44: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) I looked at her in surprise an anger, she thinks she so smart right, oh screw her! What the heck is her problem??? I bet she thinks I am terrefied because I have never disappeared before!!! Well guess what little bitch, I have so you should better stop laughing at me!!! How I wish I could tell her that, instead I get up from my bed and go towards my closet looking for some clean close, a pair of jeans and a long blue long sleeve shirt is What I put on.
"Want soem close?" I ask her without turning around, I could already see her tears streaming down her face while screams of laughter exploded out of her mouth like fireworks on july 4th. Whitout waiting for an answer I take out a pair of jeans and a balc long sleeve shirt and throw them at her while walking towards my desk, sitting down and opening a page on my notebook.


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
I keep laughing, I wont let Des's anger let me down. I pick up the clothes and look at her in surprise. I actually like them. with that thought I scream with laughter again. I walk over to her and ask her where the bathroom and hope she tells me because if not I might need another pair of clothes./ I start laughing again at the thought of me pissing my pants off while Des sits there, mad at me.


message 46: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) I looked at her and smiled, I realy wasent angry at her anymore just thought she was stupid, I told her that I had my own bathroom and it was the gray door besides the bed while thinking how stupid she was, 2 minuts ago she was almost crying about how her sister had dissappeared and not was laughing her ass off, what the heck was wrong with her??' It didnt really matter, she didnt need me anymore now that she knew I had "no idea" about where Mary was, so I would get rid of her soon, though it really didnt look like she was gonna fo anywhere soon, aghhhh.


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
I keep laughing as walk into the bathroom and smile at all the justin beiber posters on the wall, she is so stupid! I put the clothes on and walk out, posing and walking like a model. I look around, now that im not laughing so hard and thyink that I may just stay here a while, Let Des deal with me. I start screaming with laughter and crying again, crazily wonderind why Des likes justin beiber.

((haha!!!!! you have to go along ith it!!!@ hahaha justin beiber, loser!!!!! <3))


message 48: by Ana (new)

Ana (avdraws) ((no nati I am not a justin beiber fan!!!! seriusly no I will stop role playing if you do that!))


Nati^^the insane, laughing  panda^^ | 63 comments Mod
(( I know, I was talking about in the ... never mind, fine stop... sorry))


message 50: by Ana (last edited Jul 11, 2012 04:40PM) (new)

Ana (avdraws) ((no its okay, but I want my character to be cool you know not a stupid juntin beiber fan dork, okay))
((lets forget about that part of your post okay? please?))

She was still laughing aghhhh. "So you okay with the close?" I asked her concentrating on what I was writing in my notebook and not really putting much atention on her.


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