Song Writing discussion

Ok its stupid i no...
but my friends said to share it to people. and see what they think so ya. (see next comment for lyrics)

your smile brightens my day,
in every single way.
Your voice makes me melt.
It's something i've never felt.
When you come my way.
I don't know what to say.
Your laugh is like nothing i've ever heard before.
and when your gone my heart is sore.
Your eyes are blue like a summer day.
I never want it to go away.
Your all I think about.
I can get you out,
of my mind.
I'll never leave you behind.

I no it sux.
but ya.. thats all i have so far.
Feel freee to post your own songs too!