Percybeth Forever discussion

Here we want you to write the part in which they are reunited! Be Creative!

Sorry buI don't think I could pull it off. I def. Don't want to ruin it. I can write stories if they're my own ideas, and I like, KNOW the people in the story.

okay here is my version but just a summery.

Annabeth is on the ship, and the god of boarders halts the ship. Annabeth looses her balance and falls off the ship. she grabs on to a net hanging on the side of the ship and holds on for dear life. Percy sees her and summons a mega wave and catches her in it. he gets the wave to bring her to him and he catches her in his arms when the wave disperses. (and maybe then they kiss)

well that is it. i read the first chapter and i know that this is not what happens but i can dream can't i?

Summer wrote: "okay here is my version but just a summery.

Annabeth is on the ship, and the god of boarders halts the ship. Annabeth looses her balance and falls off the ship. she grabs on to a net hanging on t..."

:) YES!!
I thought up something like that!

LOL, great minds think alike

Wow I thought about...the same thing!! :D only more descript I got it all typed up then didn't have the courage to post it!

post it post it!!

She'll say no (i know her we're in the same school) im gonna call her and pester her till she says yes!!

U wouldn't...

try me...:) phone rings

Fine! (laughs) ur a pain!! I'll type it up!!

I am victorious mwahahahaha!

when tenuous shook the boat.
Annabeth fell off screaming as she fell. She silently prayed to Posiden when she hit the water she wouldn't become a Greek demigod pancake. She guess he'd heard him because she didn't die when she hit the water it hurt but she'd lived. She held her breath. Then she saw him. He dove into the water gorgeous as ever his green eyes twinkled, and all of Annabeth's worries melted of coarse he hadn't forgotten her. Of coarse he was still Greek. He wrapped his strong arms around her.
"Hey wise girl!" He smirked. He formed a bubble around them. "You know you shouldn't fall into the ocean!"
"Seaweed brain!" Annabeth said too relived to see him to be mad. She kissed him wrapping her legs around him as she did, and oh yes he kissed back! When she finally pulled away she smiled then glared, "Is all you memory back!?"
He swallowed, "Tenuous already disarmed you didn't he?"
Annabeth continued to glare.
"Ya," he said nervously.
She pushed against him," YOU DIDN'T TRY TO CONTACT ME!? I HAVE BEEN WORRIED SICK!!"
"I did! I did! Hera!"
"Oh!" that's all she needed. it was the last thing she wanted to do but she said," lets return before they become..."
"Ya," he said and kissed her once more then wrapped his arm around her waist and returned to the surface.

Ur Thoughts on it requested!

(O.O) i loved it!!!!! OH MY GODS it was amazing. maybe i should right my version in detail too, because it add to the affect. it was really creative so way to go.

(blushing) thanks...:)

*big smile* don't thank me, it was all your work.

oh my gosh I'm actually blushing :)

LOL, you have got talent, and so do i at making people blush...........

I actually wrote a poem and got it published. :)
My dream is to become a professional author!

so you complements mean A LOT!

that is awesome! i once did that, but my poem ended up being the second runner up. the only thing i have ever won is science fairs and Art galleries. i have always dreamed of getting something of mine published but so far it has never happened.

Library of Poetry
http://www.libraryofpoetry.com/contes...
i entered this contest last year we find out who wins in September. Both my best friend and I got a letter from them saying they wanted to publish us! You should enter this year!

That's a great one Sarah! Here's mine:

"Put down your weapons, now! Do you not know how to listen to your praetors?" shouted Reyna. "I will personally deal with the first person I see with a weapon in their hand in the next five seconds." There is a noticeable clatter of weapons following this statement. I smirk, Reyna sure knows how to keep them in line. Sound from the ship draws my attention back to it and the current situation. I hope no one from Camp Half-Blood gets any violent ideas. A gangplank is mechanically extending to the ground.
The first person to show up is a tall blonde kid. He looks to be about my age. Undoubtedly the famous Jason Grace...who's spot as praetor I've taken. Hope he doesn't get peeved about that, otherwise I have a feeling I'm going to be living a rerun of my fight with Thalia. The next person is the one who built this ship and contacted us, Leo Valdez. The impish grin on his features is apparent even from here. Suddenly two arms slip in between Leo and Jason, and force them to move aside. Then a face that has haunted me for the past 8 months is visible and approaching me at high speed.
"Perseus Allen Jackson! You seaweed brain!" I hear some derisive snickers. Those people are going to thoroughly get it later. And Annabeth is going to be asked to never use that in front of the Romans so freely. Talk about embarrassing. "How could you go missing for eight months without telling me if you were all right!" Annabeth shrieks, her grey eyes furious. I run towards her and pick her up into a hug, spinning her around despite her resistance. I can't help but laugh, I'm so glad to finally see her again.
"I tried! I swear on the River Styx I tried! Hera was blocking my Iris message connection!" Annabeth glares at me for a second longer, like she's trying to determine whether she believes me. As if I would swear on the River Styx if I didn't mean it! Then she gives me that smile that always makes me catch my breath.
"Fine. I forgive you." She rests her head on my chest, wrapping her arms tightly around my waist. Her next words are fervently whispered so only I can hear them. "I'm so glad you're okay. I was worried sick." I step back, placing my hand under her chin, gently raising her head so that I'm looking into her eyes.
"I doubt it was half as much as I was about you, Wise Girl," I say just as softly. Then I lean down and kiss her tenderly. She kisses me back so lovingly, and wraps her arms around my neck with an intense grip, like she's afraid I'll be spirited away again any second. I draw slightly back.
"I think that was an even better kiss than our first one," I say softly, a smirk on my face. "Oh shutup seaweed brain. Nothing could top that kiss," Annabeth replies, pulling me down for another kiss.

WOW!! holey crap!! O.O that's fantastic!!! SO much better than mine!! :)

I like it more than mine to the power of like 1,000,000,000,000!

wow, awesome version!! i love how it was from Percy's perspective. and so well written. so much detail! gosh, i am so jealous of everyone here!!

Sarah wrote: "I like it more than mine to the power of like 1,000,000,000,000!"

The Tempest
by Sarah Stratton

Behold, the storm-tossed tempest
Waves, the seaweed manes
Of foaming horses
That race with thunder at their heels
The flash of lightning
Caught in the glare of a fiery eye
With spray spewing forth from their nostrils
Poseidon's herd leads the charge
To clash against the rocky shore

was that one yours??

no where did u find that?

ill post mine

Sarah wrote: "no where did u find that?"

on the website you sent me............it kinda fits the group though....

The Waterfall By: Sarah Murphy
Grief is like a waterfall
A sudden fall of pain
But after the numbing fall
Strangely calm waters await
Under the water you feel yourself drown
Until a hand pulls you up
Up into the strangely calm air
Where you wait for the waters to take you back again
Clutching the persons arm,
Unwilling to drown again
Afraid to drown you lie there
Barely aloft
Until another hand comes and grabs you.
Then you gather up your strength and courage and
Leave the waters behind.
A wave sometimes splashes you:
A sudden burst of pain
But as you dry out you realize
It’s okay.
Your okay.
You’ll be okay
For you have learned to swim.

wow! this is awesome! such detail, such truth, pure poetry and purely amazing.

blushing again
thanks :)

:)

once again, don't thank me :)

Thank you so much Sarah and Summer. *major blush (I literally get red as a tomatoe when I blush)* I was not expecting such a nice reaction, I literally just wrote that, no planning or anything. I guess I'm just so into Percabeth that it came easily. :)

LOL, well, you have talent. and you seem to be putting it to really good use. way to go!!

Haha, thanks so much :)

hello peeps

Hey

:( that stinks!

Sarah, i don't think the headache lasted 5 hours......... jk lol. Btw u get awful headaches so i know what its like!!!!!

Sarah!!!! I love it!!! The poem is awesome! I especially love the last line! It does so much good to the poem I can't express what I want to say!

Thanks (blushing)

Oh. And yes. Sarah your an AWESOME WRITER!!!!

I meant I, not u. Sorry!!

Thanks :D

Headache post.

Idk if u were talking to me but........ your welcome if u were talking to me.

Yea! Ur head feels better!