Very cool start! Great voice you've got going--this moves in a neat way. We both have Sarahs as characters in our novels, too. ;-)
There are things that would need to be done in editing (punctuation and minor grammar stuff--but that's all minor stuff right now). You definitely have my attention. :-)
If you want, you can hop over and join my private writers' group (go to http://13-to-life-a-werewolf-tale.blo... and scroll down to the writers' group form at the bottom) over at my pseudonym's blog and I'll send you my first 7 chapters of "13 to Life: A Werewolf's Tale."
I'd love your input. :-)
I'm also very curious to see where your story goes from here--thanks for sharing it! ~Shannon
Very cool start! Great voice you've got going--this moves in a neat way. We both have Sarahs as characters in our novels, too. ;-)
There are things that would need to be done in editing (punctuation and minor grammar stuff--but that's all minor stuff right now). You definitely have my attention. :-)
If you want, you can hop over and join my private writers' group (go to http://13-to-life-a-werewolf-tale.blo... and scroll down to the writers' group form at the bottom) over at my pseudonym's blog and I'll send you my first 7 chapters of "13 to Life: A Werewolf's Tale."
I'd love your input. :-)
I'm also very curious to see where your story goes from here--thanks for sharing it!
~Shannon