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Taken

by Koko Brown (Goodreads Author)

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As with any story, the plot, setting, and characters are the backbone; without a specific synergy between these facets, a potentially phenomenal story could spiral out of control quickly. If even one of those facets is missing or under developed, th
As with any story, the plot, setting, and characters are the backbone; without a specific synergy between these facets, a potentially phenomenal story could spiral out of control quickly. If even one of those facets is missing or under developed, the story suffers, leaving the reader to wonder just what happened.
This is the case with Taken.
I was thoroughly intrigued by the premise of Taken, so much so that initially, I started with a sort of simmering excitement, believing that I would be thrust into a visceral, romantic adventure. I was ready to invest in Olivia and Khalid, ready to take that journey toward love with them but then… they met each other. And despite the passionate embers that smoldered between them, the more they interacted with each other, the more I began to question if I cared enough about following them on their path. Olivia begins the story as a strong willed, educated, self- aware woman, determined to break the mold. The moment she meets Khalid, a self-proclaimed cad who delights loving and leaving women when they get too clingy, all of that determination and strength seems to dissipate. I take issue with using sex as a tool to debase and weaken a character. The sex, although titillating enough, was profuse, often eclipsing the growth of the story; there was no forward momentum because scene after scene was nothing more than Khalid ravaging Olivia or Olivia darting between loving Khalid and despising him or her self-depreciating thoughts. Olivia was marginalized, defined only by her rising libido rather than her logic, intelligence, and character. Her indecisiveness was cumbersome and distractive and her willingness to fall into Khalid’s arms even after knowing that he merely wanted to possess her was somewhat annoying. Khalid was equally one dimensional; his chauvinistic ideals and singular obsession was disturbing and although he was described as “beautiful” and “handsome” I found that I wasn’t the least bit interested in him- that is until he took a downward spiral and was humbled. By then, I’d lost interest in Olivia and Khalid as a couple. It isn’t until they part ways that the story begins to find its depth with Khalid fighting to resurface from the brink of destruction and Olivia moving on with her life. By then, however, it’s too little too late.
That isn’t to say that this story is lacking everywhere else. Ms. Brown did a phenomenal job in describing the different locales that I did feel as if I were there in the heat of the desert or in the thick of city life. She did, however, stumble a bit on capturing the flavor of the period. The prose and the dialogue, although generally free of errors, flitted between contemporary and the past so much that I never felt like it was an authentic experience.
Taken was a decent read and intriguing enough for me to consider reading more of Ms. Brown’s work in the future. I just wished that the characters were developed past the insatiable passion and given more depth. ...more "

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Taste of Lacey

by Linden Hughes

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by Evangeline Anderson (Goodreads Author)

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