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"If I had the chance to revise my book I would add more transitions into the next chapter so it is not choppy. For example at the end of a chapter they would be a party then the next chapter they are at Venice beach, I believe she should add transitions so we understand more. If she did this I believe the book would be more understandable and flow better." — Jan 30, 2017 02:50PM
"If I had the chance to revise my book I would add more transitions into the next chapter so it is not choppy. For example at the end of a chapter they would be a party then the next chapter they are at Venice beach, I believe she should add transitions so we understand more. If she did this I believe the book would be more understandable and flow better." — Jan 30, 2017 02:50PM
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