Raven61

I hopped on my feet, leaning against the wall, my throat feeling as though it was shrinking with every breath I took. ⁉️🤨 Incorrect as written, needs to be edited, but I cannot determine the writer’s intent, so I am unable to make a suggestion. Need to change, or delete, the first part of the sentence where it states ‘I hopped on my feet … ‘, as it doesn’t make sense to me.