Status Updates From Star Corps (The Legacy Tril...

Okay we're picking up.
Still a quite a few "faceless" characters, makes it a little hard to really feel the impact when something happens to them.

Interesting consideration that the public opinion changes as they are on the way, and cannot be contacted. That's a cool consideration to think about when sending a "fire and forget" military force.

Okay! The world has officially been built. I'm ready for something to happen now...

God I hope the second part of this picks up some, and stops just throwing random characters with random names, that mean nothing in.

Slow start so far.

Slow start - Interesting world building.