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Michael Richards
is on page 60 of 216
Got board, no way near ghostly enough needs more oomph. Got to page 60 then deleted book
— Jul 23, 2015 05:05PM
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Jenna Scribbles
is 80% done
Could have been great. Needs better flow and an editor. But I really like this author's characters.
— Sep 21, 2013 12:40PM
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Jenna Scribbles
is 56% done
I like all the characters. That's rare.
It definitely needs an edit. The punctuation is off in many, many places.
— Sep 20, 2013 08:09AM
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It definitely needs an edit. The punctuation is off in many, many places.
Lindy
is on page 4 of 216
a free read from amazon... we'll see how it goes!
— Sep 13, 2013 06:09PM
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Beth
is 65% done
Really enjoying reading this. I stand by the need for an editor but don't let that prevent you from reading this. Also don't let the Mr and Mrs Howell speak (hope she doesn't continue that in future books) because this is a great summer (or anytime) read. I love all the little paranormal legends and locations in Cornwall that she provides. Also I'm enjoying the romance because it's written more believable than most
— Jul 17, 2012 01:24PM
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Beth
is 58% done
So far the novel is cute and fun. I love the Cornwall setting. The archaic dialogue is weird though.. "please do call me caitlin". ... uhh.. wha? Everyone sounds like Mr and Mrs Howell. That aside, the setting is cool, the ghosts are fairly interesting and it's keeping me interested. Also agree author needs an editor and a cover artist. I'm available to do both for a small fee. lol
— Jul 17, 2012 07:51AM
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