Status Updates From Flash and Filigree

Opening the door, he stepped out of the booth and fell squarely face down on the carpeted floor. It caused a great commotion in the bar, and before the Doctor could reach him, two of the waiters were on their knees, hovering over the body.

if the plot made any sense at all, the satire that is here about systems both administrative and social would be much more charming. I am afraid it's just an overwritten mess so far