Status Updates From Jane's Long March Home (Fal...

Jane is really pissing me off. She not only beats a dead horse, she pummels it into the ground so far underground it shows up on the other side of the world. Then, when I think she finally is making progress, she becomes wishy washy! The worst example is when she flirts, pursues, and loves Chase & even before the afterglow hits she flip flops to whoops..I can't do this, sorry. Argh.

Book needs an editor to clean up the grammar errors and mistakes, but so far it's a compelling story.