Status Updates From Cinder and Ella

I wasn’t sure what to think at first, but the writing in this story is kind of giving the same vibes as The Princess Bride. I could’ve done with a shorter segment of forrest travel, but the comedy was pretty decent. Ella and Tanner are cute together. She has her moments of weakness and comical defiance, but the shifts in between are a little sharp. Tanner amuses me too; he’s a simp. Overall, not terrible yet.