Status Updates From Code Name: Atlas

I don't know... I'm putting it aside for awhile. It's good... it's not so good... I just don't know.

Mixed feelings about this book. Going along great then hit some blatant faulty tense sentence or misused word, and it's like slamming on the breaks. A copy editor maybe?

WARNING. I was there, at the beginning of critters.org. I was there for ages. Mutually helping each other with our RAW manuscripts. TONY, if you want me to stop reading your "book" before I 'review' (critique) please alert me ASAP. I'll reschedule this book for later down my "to-read" list. But tell me soon. I've started reading.

I never understood why, in all those Saturday morning cartoons, the villain can never kill the hero quickly once he has him captured. This is the inevitable flaw of the archenemy that leads to the escape of the hero and the eventual demise of the villain.

I flipping knew it!!!!

I fell in love with you the first time you spoke to me. I loved what was inside of you. I loved the way you saw the world and I loved that there was a beautiful woman carrying around that brain of yours.