Status Updates From Rosalee Station

I'm tempted to dnf but this is so easy to read.

"Sarah could tell he was a man who said what he meant and meant what he said."
That is the same thing said twice.
Also Sarah is continuing to speak like a child. "I'm looking forward to meeting her. And it's going to be fantastic going for a flight with you!' Sarah squealed, barely able to contain her excitement.

The main character is 23 but she speaks like a child. She's like, "this is the bestest day ever. My parents bought me a horse for my birthday" and I'm inwardly cringing especially because I am very close to her age.