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John
is 12% done
Oh, SmartCar, fancy electronic house, and organic food, thanks for sharing, Main Character. Would you like a medal for that? Getting irritated with this one.
— Jul 10, 2016 04:19AM
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John
is 10% done
The main character is coming awfully close to Mary Sue territory...
— Jul 08, 2016 05:35AM
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John Raynor
is 41% done
Fourth one percent in. Little wordy at times. I know the author wants us to see and feel where the character is, but I don't need it. Other than that, I like it so far. Good chapter, okay chapter, okay chapter. Good chapter....... I'm sure it'll pick up.
— Oct 09, 2015 05:48PM
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Cherie
is 23% done
It's good. Not great, yet. Definitely a more mature book as far as writing goes. I've been reading teenager-type dystopian novels for the past few months so this is a welcomed break. It is well-written and I'm intrigued so far.
— Jun 24, 2014 09:34AM
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