Status Updates From The Story of Tol

This beautiful story unfortunately is REALLY NOT my cup of tea; honestly not sth I can stomach. Perhaps I'd have read more reviews before attempting this story; well, it's a lesson learnt. Anyway, this is SM story, which could be amazing to read & broaden my horizon. But I can't bring myself to read about the manipulation & destruction brought about by the MC on another. I'm not even sure there's a redemption for him

Oh man, that's no kitty it's shark. Maybe Tol has finally met his match. That'd be fun.

Wow, the opening is gritty, scary and dark. For a while, I'm not sure whether or not to continue. Then, more unfolds and I think this story should be interesting because the author seems to have good writing skill. The contrast used in the narration makes me feel like watching an opening of a movie, with insights into the protagonist's head. Amazing… Though the synopsis promises an unconventional story…

Back to Tol now.

Derek and Gavin are like a comedy act.

Egads. My first 'Mistress'.

Ok, everybody knows I have no patience with the incessant crying. Sniveling cause you see foxes, now?? Im having trouble reconciling this Tol with Mr. I want to hurt you and make you scream. He just started bawling way too easily, right after Aaron left.

Tol, I'm already liking this master. Didn't even say hello. Just walked up and peed on you. What a greeting. Letting you know right away where you stand..or in your case, lay and that you were his property. Stiff upper lip, now. It's ok. He's only here to break you.

Tol, what the hell are you crying about?? In a ball on the ground, snivelling. Get up and face your punishment like a man. Bastid.

I was awoken by a loud click.

I opened my eyes. The light was on, and Maxim was looking down at me.
He was holding a gun, touching my face between the eyes. Oh gawd, I just popped a lady boner.

Oh Tol, I agree with Aaron. 'You stupid f*ck." Please, can I watch when Maxim gets his hands on you? Pretty please.

That's right Colin. Warn the fool. Idiot.

Or maybe not. Maxim is being quite understanding!

Oh wait, I wasn't even at 10%. Well, Tol, you just effed royally didn't you? What part of stop-stop-stop did you miss? Tsk tsk. Things are gonna get bad for you brah.

Well this is shaping up to be... um wow.

hmm.

I'm so proud of you Tol. You stopped.

So much talking and introspection.

Bastards, don't talk about Gavin like that. Get 'em Derek.

Ahh, don't change and be all sappy and sweet now.

Better now