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Jessy
Jessy is starting
Needs some heavy editing; grammar mistakes, spelling mistakes and overall errors. In one fighting scene the FMC flees outside, only for the rest of the scene to continue inside. Very annoying and unprofessional.
Mar 07, 2023 10:42AM Add a comment
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Jenny P
Jenny P is 86% done
Wait... why did he let her think he murdered her brother? I am SO confused.
Mar 03, 2023 12:03PM Add a comment
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Jenny P
Jenny P is 13% done
“You think you know it all? A King doesn’t need to be a gentleman.”

I rolled my eyes. “No,” I said firmly. “But a man does.”

Just saw this was well over 400pgs and I can't possibly see why it needed to be that long.. we'll see.
Mar 03, 2023 09:22AM Add a comment
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