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Jessy
Jessy is starting
Needs some heavy editing; grammar mistakes, spelling mistakes and overall errors. In one fighting scene the FMC flees outside, only for the rest of the scene to continue inside. Very annoying and unprofessional.
— Mar 07, 2023 10:42AM Add a comment
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Jenny P
Jenny P is 86% done
Wait... why did he let her think he murdered her brother? I am SO confused.
— Mar 03, 2023 12:03PM Add a comment
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Jenny P
Jenny P is 13% done
“You think you know it all? A King doesn’t need to be a gentleman.”

I rolled my eyes. “No,” I said firmly. “But a man does.”

Just saw this was well over 400pgs and I can't possibly see why it needed to be that long.. we'll see.
— Mar 03, 2023 09:22AM Add a comment
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