Status Updates From Bloodwinn. Wiedźma krwi

This chapter is another point where it feels like the author forgot what she was writing. Where is the smoke coming from if the pyre isn’t lit yet? How is it a pyre if in the prior chapter this was described as a bound girl kneeling before a pile of kindling? That is a much smaller description than the author seems to have thought.

This chapter is kind of a mess. The dream sequence is well done, giving us a look into the witch’s’ experiences as culture and alliances changed, but as soon as Ranka wakes up it’s a disorienting read. She’s panicked, there’s smoke, something wrong at the castle but wait, there’s nothing wrong at the castle and she had time to slowly talk to Percy but if she does he will figure out her plot?