Status Updates From Ventimila leghe sotto i mari

Verne has never heard to show not tell. He thinks they’re two separate things. Tell then show.

Also, I’m starting to have to skip through half a page long lists of ocean terminology that benefit the story in almost no way. The whole bony vs cartilaginous fish thing was so unnecessary, if they were just trying to show of councils skills they could have done that with one dialogue line.

Lots of lists and technical descriptions since we’ve left the cell