Status Updates From Paradies

"...the fangs and the tail are somewhere else. Out yonder all slithery in a house full of women. Not women locked safely away from men; but worse, women who chose themselves for company, which is to say not a convent but a coven."

Struggling with this one. Writing is beautiful but somehow not locking in even at 45%. Gonna put is aside for real for a bit and come back to it at the end I think.