Status Updates From Revenant: City of Artem : A...

Its very juvenile and honestly shallow how all Luna, Rain and Gessh only humor and banter is about fucking, sex and how to fuck about sex with Kabutt. We get that they are not into him, but holy fuck it reads like a penny harem and its just annoying.

He is trying so very hard to sound hardboiled, to the point of parody. We really, really don't need another monologue or how hardocre he is, how brutal must he be or how he is becoming soft by not being an all-out psycho. It really robs a lot of the weight from the character.

Holy shit, this went so very racist. I don't know if this was the author or the narrator, but man, that was bad. Uncle tom kind of bad.

DFN

I'm a little mad. I am actually enjoying this story but damn with the transphobic representation! Do we actually need transphobic comments in 2023?
Bah, I'm sad