Status Updates From As Meat Loves Salt

things are starting to look up for Mr. Jacob Cullen but i don’t like how quickly he’s forgiven for his transgressions. i mean, threatening to kill a boy after already having killed another and then drawing a knife on his friend…

i’m very intrigued to see how his web of lies are going to spin out and bite him in the ass

it’s starting to pick up, however, i’m not at all a fan of the protagonist (especially the rape part)

you cannot be using 19th century English in your writing and then describe someone as being “hot” (as in the modern usage of the word to describe someone as attractive, not their temperature)