Status Updates From Nightworld

I'm enjoying this story much more than anticipated based on others' reviews. I just wish it had better proofreading/editing done before publishing.

Can't believe I'm actually finishing this!

Should i read on or just accept that this will take ages to finish? It had an interesting start but by now it's just ridiculous.

Nothing much in this book makes sense. Sapphire runs around, threatening people with a huge sword, and nobody seems to care? And how did the huge deer carcass gets onto her car? Must be something like 300kg! I can't believe a heavily pregnant woman dragged it onto the hood of her car!

This is just so hard to follow! I can keep up with the reality changes (now vs Nightworld), but the times are confusing. One second she's a fierce butt kicking Safire with Ne'erbow, the next she's young and untrained with a dude and wolves. Also hoping the relationship with Thomas "matures" soon. These are adults carrying on like 5 yr olds!