Status Updates From In Love

The plot and overall story are very interesting, and there are lots of great quotes, but the racist remarks sprinkled throughout took away any respect I could have had for it. The writing is hard to follow, and often times I can’t tell if the characters are actually speaking aloud, or if it’s just a stream of thoughts from different perspectives.

Slightly hard to follow with the way it’s written

“It was inevitable that I should lose her, what bothered me most was that I lost her to somebody I could not feel superior to” sorry to break it to you but that’s not love brother

When a man describes a woman he loves like that for a whole chapter, I just know it’s going to be TRAGIC. Here we go again i guess

Loveeee lowkey im the #girl