Status Updates From Annie Freeman's Fabulous Tr...

I love it when you call me baby

Ion wanna

funeral still hasn’t started
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the shit was annoying and so is constantly hearing about how amazing Annie was, but Rebecca’s chapters were the least painful so far

attempting to hide again
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I have a feeling the author is trying to fit every stereotypical archetype of woman in this book and show they can all be so different and yet besties and that’s the complexity of womanhood

“absolutely fabulous ovaries”, “like only a female doctors hands can glide”, “best woman friend”

everyone is awesome because they’re a woman they have no complexity

I forgot Sarah was active on here recently too, you can’t read these either.











Either I’m getting used to the writing or it’s getting a little better. Still very run on sentence-y

Not as bad as first two chapters, can see how the grief stuff could be compelling but it’s a little too cringy for me

Allison don’t read this





























ofc she died by ovarian cancer, first the tits now this. girl power agenda pushing hard. could’ve been a good girl power push if it didn’t feel forced

Allison don’t read this















nonstop run on sentences

also yea we know you’re a woman you don’t need to keep mentioning your tits (I get it’s supposed to be a metaphor whatever)

said she leaned over her mothers coffin .8 years ago and then says it’s been 8 months since her mother passed 12 pages later. .8 years is not 8 months bffr

Probably going to give up on this, it seems too much for women of a different generation. The story is good, the dialogue is a drag!!! I grind the writing so boring yet I want to know how the story unfolds but I can’t w the writing style omg!