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Huw Evans
Huw Evans is 75% done
Reading this in e-book format so what I thought was duplication turned out to be me paging backwards! Plotline remains taught and busy and the descriptions of the environment have some surprises. generally enjoying this but the typos make for a bumpy read.
Dec 30, 2011 03:53AM Add a comment
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Huw Evans
Huw Evans is 55% done
great storyline, strong concepts; would benefit from third person proof reading as it stands
Dec 20, 2011 02:34AM Add a comment
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Huw Evans
Huw Evans is 55% done
Great storyline, fascinating concepts and bloody in t
Dec 20, 2011 02:30AM Add a comment
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Cat
Cat is on page 10 of 502
I'm only 3% in, and am very intrigued. My only gripe is the verbiage. I think more synonyms could have been used; or at least things could have been worded differently. I.E. "Though his voice was clear it was obvious that the lone figure was as troubled as a rabbit when it hears the call of an owl warning that a wolf is hungry and on the prowl." Couldn't it have been "...warning that a predator was..."? IMHO
Nov 23, 2011 09:37PM Add a comment
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Cat
Cat is on page 10 of 502
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