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I don't know what to make of this. I find myself skipping past the descriptive sex scenes. Unnecessary to the plot of the book. If I wanted to read detail like that I would read Penthouse magazine.

Picking back up again after that mid point stumble.

Started out well but the sex scene really bogged the pace down.

a great short!

This is one of the best ebooks self published I've ever seen.

The story's good too, only its going to be short :(

There are still tons of pop culture references in the dialogue that doesn't seem natural.

The male secondary character is annoying me w/ cliched lines describing the main female character as a "goddess" and "angel." Also, I also can't tell if it is present-day or the future since there are constant pop-culture references but also secret science labs.